The Seven Deadlies
They'll get you in the end22 total reviews
Comment from karenina
This is too wise to be funny...and yet the irreverent kick in the pants with "God gave everybody but Noah and his family the Big Bath" was the perfect chaser for this bracing tall cold one of the "Seven Deadlies!"--- Robyn was write...you're writing is addictive! I started with your first two posts and moved to this one for today... BUT--I'll be back! --Karenina
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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This is too wise to be funny...and yet the irreverent kick in the pants with "God gave everybody but Noah and his family the Big Bath" was the perfect chaser for this bracing tall cold one of the "Seven Deadlies!"--- Robyn was write...you're writing is addictive! I started with your first two posts and moved to this one for today... BUT--I'll be back! --Karenina
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Your wry wit is contagious. I hope I'm infected with it and never find a cure!--Karenina
Comment from harmony13
I like the author's words. I recently made a copy of the Deadly Sins. The author's words define them in a clear understandable way. The artwork
is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
These words flow and connect well. Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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I like the author's words. I recently made a copy of the Deadly Sins. The author's words define them in a clear understandable way. The artwork
is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
These words flow and connect well. Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Your poetic description of the seven deadly sins is very impressive. Liked your rhymes and flow, and the great imagery and visuals used.
You choice a fine artwork to go with the poem.
Very well done.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Your poetic description of the seven deadly sins is very impressive. Liked your rhymes and flow, and the great imagery and visuals used.
You choice a fine artwork to go with the poem.
Very well done.
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Senyai
I simply love this! Earl, you incorporated all seven deadlies within this verse with impeccable meter and rhyme, I thought.
Got a kick out of the Flood being referred to as God's wrath at giving earth's inhabitants a bath! .. except Noah and family plus all nature's creatures of course
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Delightful.
Senyai
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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I simply love this! Earl, you incorporated all seven deadlies within this verse with impeccable meter and rhyme, I thought.
Got a kick out of the Flood being referred to as God's wrath at giving earth's inhabitants a bath! .. except Noah and family plus all nature's creatures of course
ð???
Delightful.
Senyai
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much Senyai. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from juliaSjames
Yup, it's tough to lead a godly life. I call some of these insidious sins.. They creep up on you.
Good poetic style.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Yup, it's tough to lead a godly life. I call some of these insidious sins.. They creep up on you.
Good poetic style.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much Julia. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello Earl: I thank you for posting this piece of spiritual wisdom. I see it as spiritual wisdom because it lines up with what the Holy Bible says in the book of PSALMS at chapter # 1. Earl...you have really done a good job here...of letting us know about the 7 deadly sins. I thank you for sharing. God bless you, Earl. cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Hello Earl: I thank you for posting this piece of spiritual wisdom. I see it as spiritual wisdom because it lines up with what the Holy Bible says in the book of PSALMS at chapter # 1. Earl...you have really done a good job here...of letting us know about the 7 deadly sins. I thank you for sharing. God bless you, Earl. cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much Rhonnie69. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Xenia Escobar
Each stanza dedicated to each of the deadly sins. I liked this approach. I was a nice read. Don't downplay your skills. You're poem was great. You just need to tweak your confidence and you'll be good. I enjoyed it. You're meter may not have been perfect but I thought your piece was great anyway!
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Each stanza dedicated to each of the deadly sins. I liked this approach. I was a nice read. Don't downplay your skills. You're poem was great. You just need to tweak your confidence and you'll be good. I enjoyed it. You're meter may not have been perfect but I thought your piece was great anyway!
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear earl, even if this poem was not promoted, I think it most worthy of a review. I sincerely hope that everyone who reads it, whether they write a review or not, will see those seven deadly sins posted. and having read them, that they may give them A reason to reflect upon the nature of their own life, because the consequences are laid out very clearly.
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Dear earl, even if this poem was not promoted, I think it most worthy of a review. I sincerely hope that everyone who reads it, whether they write a review or not, will see those seven deadly sins posted. and having read them, that they may give them A reason to reflect upon the nature of their own life, because the consequences are laid out very clearly.
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from HarryT
I like this poem a lot, to me it is very clever. Although meter is lacking at times there still is a pretty good flow. The rhyming, in my opinion, is very good. I suggest deleting these two lines: "As you can see/It's hard for me," in order to keep the four-line stanzas. My one question is won't we all turn to dust?
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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I like this poem a lot, to me it is very clever. Although meter is lacking at times there still is a pretty good flow. The rhyming, in my opinion, is very good. I suggest deleting these two lines: "As you can see/It's hard for me," in order to keep the four-line stanzas. My one question is won't we all turn to dust?
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your deadly sins poem. I enjoyed reading it. You expressed your thoughts and feelings well. I like that you gave each one its own verse. Your words are descriptive, the rhymes work well, and you give readers much to think about in their own lives. The image is a great pairing.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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You did a good job with your deadly sins poem. I enjoyed reading it. You expressed your thoughts and feelings well. I like that you gave each one its own verse. Your words are descriptive, the rhymes work well, and you give readers much to think about in their own lives. The image is a great pairing.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 17-May-2021
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Thank you very much Jan. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
