You'll Come Around
Chill, Baby2 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
These would make great song lyrics. I like the laconic style you achieve with your short lines and easy use of dialect.
You've got me running down to the local grog shop for a slab of pale ale! LOL
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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These would make great song lyrics. I like the laconic style you achieve with your short lines and easy use of dialect.
You've got me running down to the local grog shop for a slab of pale ale! LOL
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Yep... Get the ale on my friend!
Thanks for a sweet review
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Btw i shortened that middle stanza a bit to maintain the vibe. Take another look if you dont mind tell me what u think
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Now ima head to the fridge foe a Heineken lol
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being there for someone to prevent them falling into despair is what friends are for and you captures the essence of it here. I pretty much rely on myself, but my friends are always there when I need them and I do the same, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Being there for someone to prevent them falling into despair is what friends are for and you captures the essence of it here. I pretty much rely on myself, but my friends are always there when I need them and I do the same, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Im like you..self reliant but friends are there.
Thank you
