Cold Night
Nature poem3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
This is great! The only thing I see is "Owls shout hoots of the dark". Perhaps in the dark would work better. The graphic you chose is excellent, and you certainly captured the story within the guidelines. Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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This is great! The only thing I see is "Owls shout hoots of the dark". Perhaps in the dark would work better. The graphic you chose is excellent, and you certainly captured the story within the guidelines. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Okay, I fixed the mistake. Is it good enough for five stars? Thank you!
Comment from DentedSyke
This is nice work, given the format. I was prepared to rate this at four stars, but I read it three more times (after the initial two readings) and I finally saw the meaning in the last line. It was really clever what you did there. Nice work and nice imagery.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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This is nice work, given the format. I was prepared to rate this at four stars, but I read it three more times (after the initial two readings) and I finally saw the meaning in the last line. It was really clever what you did there. Nice work and nice imagery.
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Thank you!
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Cheers!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the nature contest
with nice description of the owls at night.
Great picture to match your words.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the nature contest
with nice description of the owls at night.
Great picture to match your words.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Thank you!
