The Fae Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "No Money, No Job, No Home"Still just a germ of an idea that the moment
3 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Ah, so cute! I love the little characters. Peter, so uptight about how things might look and George, the lonely little bogyman. Lol! They speak with distinct voices. Fun to read, Bob. You're a rare talent.
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Ah, so cute! I love the little characters. Peter, so uptight about how things might look and George, the lonely little bogyman. Lol! They speak with distinct voices. Fun to read, Bob. You're a rare talent.
Comment Written 21-May-2021
reply by the author on 22-May-2021
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Thank you very much. Glad you liked it
Comment from tfawcus
I've still got a bit of catching up to do but I'm enjoying the interplay between these characters and the humour in their exchanges. You obviously proofread these chapters pretty thoroughly before posting. Another entertaining read.
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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I've still got a bit of catching up to do but I'm enjoying the interplay between these characters and the humour in their exchanges. You obviously proofread these chapters pretty thoroughly before posting. Another entertaining read.
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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You're very kind, thank you. Glad you were entertained
Comment from robyn corum
Bob,
I really, really, really, soooooooo like George. I mean, if you cast a thousand characters in your life - I still think George might be my favorite. My stars, how long have you been thinking of him in your head before you gave him a breath in the last chapter or two? You are definitely a solid meanie. I plan to think horrid thoughts of you for at least the next half-hour. So there.
But I adored this chapter. Thanks!
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Bob,
I really, really, really, soooooooo like George. I mean, if you cast a thousand characters in your life - I still think George might be my favorite. My stars, how long have you been thinking of him in your head before you gave him a breath in the last chapter or two? You are definitely a solid meanie. I plan to think horrid thoughts of you for at least the next half-hour. So there.
But I adored this chapter. Thanks!
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Well, I've always thought bogey men must be awfully shy, to the point of being agorophobic. And I introduced George earlier in the book. But I don't like him. I think he'll come to a sticky end soon.
Or will he?
Glad you liked it. Thanks for such an effusive review
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