The Fae Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Graffitti"Still just a germ of an idea that the moment
4 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Poor Bob! I wouldn't like someone waking me up early on a Sunday morning either. And they're writing graffiti on his building after him standing up for them. They're just like real folks, alright. Bob's got the right attitude. No use going into a panic. Deal with the problem and move on. Lol! Maybe my review is as much about me dealing with a little problem as it is your chapter. I read it aloud and thoroughly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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Poor Bob! I wouldn't like someone waking me up early on a Sunday morning either. And they're writing graffiti on his building after him standing up for them. They're just like real folks, alright. Bob's got the right attitude. No use going into a panic. Deal with the problem and move on. Lol! Maybe my review is as much about me dealing with a little problem as it is your chapter. I read it aloud and thoroughly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 17-May-2021
reply by the author on 18-May-2021
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You're very kind. I too find it hard to read without my lips moving ;)
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Lol! I watched an old clip of Oliver Reed and Shelly Winters on the Johnny Carson show last night. Reid was being an ass, trying to tell Winters she should be quiet it was his turn to shine. He might have been kidding but she didn't laugh. She poured a pitcher of water over his head. Johnny Carson rolled his eyes and didn't say a word. Lol! I loved it. Star power! Let's you get away with something everybody wants to do at one point or another. Not you, Bob. But some people. Lol!
Comment from robyn corum
Bob,
Grrr.... So you're gonna make us wait until next time to find out exactly what it says? You meanie. I assume it's calling for a race war from what little you're saying. That's not a bit nice. Okay -- I'm still in. More!
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Bob,
Grrr.... So you're gonna make us wait until next time to find out exactly what it says? You meanie. I assume it's calling for a race war from what little you're saying. That's not a bit nice. Okay -- I'm still in. More!
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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As soon as I work out what it said, I'll let you know. Thanks as ever for the review
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Well written. Interesting. Readers who find profanity offensive will most likely not enjoy this read.
An author is advised to consider the reader in order to expand interest in their works. It is the reader who makes the author well known. Good wishes
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Well written. Interesting. Readers who find profanity offensive will most likely not enjoy this read.
An author is advised to consider the reader in order to expand interest in their works. It is the reader who makes the author well known. Good wishes
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 11-May-2021
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Thank you. I did place a warning for language on the post. Glad you found it interesting
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I noticed your warning. My comment was a general aside. A strong story such as your's requires the language you used. This goes without question. One writes to win the reader. Kind regards
Comment from DentedSyke
This. This is very good. The dialogue - which is so tough to get right - is spot on, and the story moves right along at a steady, pleasurable clip. I'd say this was a real winner. You have a deft touch for dialogue.
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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This. This is very good. The dialogue - which is so tough to get right - is spot on, and the story moves right along at a steady, pleasurable clip. I'd say this was a real winner. You have a deft touch for dialogue.
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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You're very kind, thank you. Glad you liked it