The Fae Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "I'm never going to drink again"Still just a germ of an idea that the moment
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Comment from Adri7enne
Fascinating for me to see how you imagine the 'boogieman'. As a child I also imagined it as a creature that lived under things - under beds, under chairs. I had nightmares about a creature that crossed the yard, pulling a chair over itself, like a turtle with its shell. Gives me shivers today. Lol! I like the idea of confronting it and having a chat with it. Fun, Bob. Got so into the story I didn't see any spag.
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Fascinating for me to see how you imagine the 'boogieman'. As a child I also imagined it as a creature that lived under things - under beds, under chairs. I had nightmares about a creature that crossed the yard, pulling a chair over itself, like a turtle with its shell. Gives me shivers today. Lol! I like the idea of confronting it and having a chat with it. Fun, Bob. Got so into the story I didn't see any spag.
Comment Written 16-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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You're very kind, thanks. Yes, the bogie man must be a terrible agoraphobic, don't you think?
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I wasn't looking at it from his POV. Lol! But yes, he has obvious self-image issues. Lol!
Comment from Ulla
It's the first I've read of your story. I will be honest that fantasy fiction is not really me. But this one caught my eye and I can understand wy Peter would find it weird to speak somebody who's under his bed and cannot see. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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It's the first I've read of your story. I will be honest that fantasy fiction is not really me. But this one caught my eye and I can understand wy Peter would find it weird to speak somebody who's under his bed and cannot see. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Thanks for the review
Comment from robyn corum
Bob,
Very nice. I would never have thought to see that critter under the bed in an adult (rather) serious story - but I LIKE it. *smile* Well done. And the dialogue here is simple priceless. Loved that, too.
Note:
"Sub basement. I don't like the light. Sorry(.)"
Thanks!
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Bob,
Very nice. I would never have thought to see that critter under the bed in an adult (rather) serious story - but I LIKE it. *smile* Well done. And the dialogue here is simple priceless. Loved that, too.
Note:
"Sub basement. I don't like the light. Sorry(.)"
Thanks!
Comment Written 10-May-2021
reply by the author on 10-May-2021
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Thanks for another generous review. Glad you liked it
Comment from DentedSyke
This is entertaining reading. I really like George. This excerpt reminds me so much of the Artemis Fowl books; it has the same sense of humor and the same feel about it. You have a good flow with your work, and the story moves along without needing a lot of action. Nice work.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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This is entertaining reading. I really like George. This excerpt reminds me so much of the Artemis Fowl books; it has the same sense of humor and the same feel about it. You have a good flow with your work, and the story moves along without needing a lot of action. Nice work.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it
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You're welcome.
