Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-6-3 jisei haiku, Dandelion, has the proper formatting and gives the reader an image of the lone seed carried off to its destiny........

 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thank you for your feedback, Bill.
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

So ethereal...dandelion whiskers are so dainty and I love to see them twirl in the wind. I wish you the best of luck with this dainty, sweet write...it is like you, dainty with a strong heart!

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 Comment Written 08-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Aw, bless you! Thank you for your lovely feedback, Sherry :) Best wishes as always, Debra

reply by Sherry Asbury on 09-May-2021

I just loved this!!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your haiku for the club, Debra. The color scheme and image are perfect to pair with your well-composed words. I get the image of a soul gently blowing in the breeze after a death that may, or may not, have been traumatic. However one dies, the image and words is applicable.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thank you so much, Jan :) I appreciate your thoughtful feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra