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a 25 syllable poem
2 total reviews
Comment from
Pj Dennison
Your poem is excellent. Your rhyme scheme is great as well as your meter which is consistent throughout the poem. I enjoyed the images that I saw in my mind of the wind blowing the leaves out of the tree and they float down swaying as if dancing the waltz. The artwork goes so well with your poem.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
Thanks for the encouraging review.
I hope that you are having a great weekend,
cheers, j
reply by Pj Dennison on 08-May-2021
Comment from
lancellot
This is very nice. I counted and you do have exactly twenty-five syllables. Yes, when the wind blows leaves around the yard, it does resemble a dance. Nature's way of giving us a show. Good idea for the contest and well done on translating the scene into words.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
Thanks for the insightful review. I hope that you are having a great weekend,
cheers, j
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