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Mayor's orders

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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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I went to you profile page to see if I had missed something and this one was there. This is a funny one. The mayor of DC has made a rule there is no dancing at weddings. I think it's wonderful that she has solved all of the other problems in the city.

Robert

 Comment Written 12-May-2021


reply by the author on 12-May-2021
    oh, yes. And of course, I had to exaggerate and have her go a step farther. (further?)
    still, ridiculous.
    Thanks for reading.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 12-May-2021
    You're welcome.

    In DC they might not be allowed to get married. HAHAHA

    Z
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
    you funny!
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 12-May-2021
    I'm a smart little frog. You said so. HAHAHAHAHA

    I wear that as a badge of honor.
Comment from mobileliz
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Very good question. However, orders or no orders, I never slept 6-ft away from my spouse unless we were mad at each other. Then we didn't sleep. I take it this was taken in 2020 during C-19?

 Comment Written 08-May-2021


reply by the author on 09-May-2021
    nope. the DC mayor just the other day. no dancing or getting close at weddings. This is my response.
reply by mobileliz on 09-May-2021
    you're welcome
Comment from tfawcus
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Ha! Ha! Romance is a bit like fly fishing. It's all in the anticipation. Once you've hooked the fish, all you want to do is take it off the hook and throw it back.

 Comment Written 07-May-2021


reply by the author on 07-May-2021
    uh oh, and the mayor's not helping. saw it on the news, at weddings, no dancing!!! must stay 6 ft apart. and after?
Comment from Bonnie Seach
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Maybe the Mayor doesn't quite understand the principle of celibacy.
Fast, flowing and well formatted. The artwork depicts the couple's dilemma. Cold, and without the warmth of intimacy. So sad

 Comment Written 07-May-2021


reply by the author on 07-May-2021
    thank you, Bonnie.
    Don't know how some of our mayors got elected! or stay in office.
reply by Bonnie Seach on 07-May-2021
    It's the people who elect them that are to blame 🙄😂
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
    very true
reply by Bonnie Seach on 09-May-2021
    Sad isn't it? Go well
Comment from rspoet
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This is a good 3-5-3 poem that hits the current humor theme.
Somehow I don't think they will be six feet apart.
Looks more like they have marital problems
that won't be solved by any mayor though.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert.


 Comment Written 07-May-2021


reply by the author on 07-May-2021
    I need a better picture, huh?
Comment from lancellot
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I don't get it. I mean I understand what it says. Your mayor order people stay six feet apart and you show a married couple sleeping in different beds, six feet apart. Who would do that?

Anyway, it is not a 3-5-3 entry, and by the notes you know that. So, again, I don't get it.

 Comment Written 07-May-2021


reply by the author on 07-May-2021
    it was a mistake. corrected it. was thinking 5-7-5. was commenting on some stupid mayor talking about weddings - no dancing, no being less than 6 ft apart. this was just a joke, or rather making fun of her mandate.
Comment from DentedSyke
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Okay, this is good. I like the humor and the relevance to the covid crisis. Unfortunately, this is not a 3-5-3 piece; it is a 5-7-5 piece. Yeah, I love the joke; it's very clever. I want to give you more stars, I just can't. Hope you understand. Still, I like your humor.

 Comment Written 07-May-2021


reply by the author on 07-May-2021
    sorry. fixed it. was thinking 5-7-5 ( or rather, not thinking)
    thanks anyway; corrected it. not as good, but patched as best i could.
reply by DentedSyke on 07-May-2021
    Glad I could help.
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
    Please forgive me. Meant to recommend you for catch, but was in such a hurry yo correct, didnt do it at the time. don;t know how to go back an do it.
reply by DentedSyke on 07-May-2021
    No problem. I appreciate the sentiment. Cheers!
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
    ah. you're the Art of Creating Art person. nice.
reply by DentedSyke on 07-May-2021
    Thank you!