A Day Well Spent
A Roundabout Poem for Potlatch Poetry26 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
And a day well spent I would say, watching nature. A lovely read, your Roundabout poem, as the birds, the sqirrels and those hardworking ants get on with their business. Nice one Yvonne, cheers valda
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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And a day well spent I would say, watching nature. A lovely read, your Roundabout poem, as the birds, the sqirrels and those hardworking ants get on with their business. Nice one Yvonne, cheers valda
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 12-May-2021
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Thank you, Valda. I spend a lot of time watching these little worlds in my yard.
Comment from lyenochka
You always make each new potlatch challenge form look so easy! And I love your nature poems. This one flows and I smiled at the "with lunch purloined," and then the squirrels got into stealing seeds and the ants benefitted. You make these observations so much fun!
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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You always make each new potlatch challenge form look so easy! And I love your nature poems. This one flows and I smiled at the "with lunch purloined," and then the squirrels got into stealing seeds and the ants benefitted. You make these observations so much fun!
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you saying that, and thank you for this wonderful review and stars.
Comment from aryr
I liked this Roundabout poem, Yvonne. I loved the concept you used in your words. You relied on the creations of nature, a great idea. Very well done. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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I liked this Roundabout poem, Yvonne. I loved the concept you used in your words. You relied on the creations of nature, a great idea. Very well done. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you. I'm a nature nut, and write a lot about it, to the point of boring everyone. lol.
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You are so welcome Yvonne.
Comment from Irish Rain
I just love this.
I love reading about the little critters
and their ways, and what a simply charming picture!!
Makes for a wonderful presentation!!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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I just love this.
I love reading about the little critters
and their ways, and what a simply charming picture!!
Makes for a wonderful presentation!!
Blessings...
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you so much. I'm a nature nut. It's what I do most, watching little critters.
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Oh, me too!! That's when I'm closest to God!!
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Me, too! 8-)
Comment from poetwatch
What a nature lover you are. :) Here I am trying to keep those crawling critters away from the house and you spend time enjoying their work. :) These is a good club entry. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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What a nature lover you are. :) Here I am trying to keep those crawling critters away from the house and you spend time enjoying their work. :) These is a good club entry. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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I'm a bit weird, aren't I? hahaha. Thanks for reviewing this.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvonne, oh liked this poem a lot. As you know I don't know a thing about meter or any of that. But I liked the imagery and rhythm of your poem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hi Yvonne, oh liked this poem a lot. As you know I don't know a thing about meter or any of that. But I liked the imagery and rhythm of your poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you. Now you know what I do all day. lol
Comment from harmony13
This poem is lovely and sparks the inner child in me. The author's words
are interesting, uplifting and creative. I found these words inspiring and
thinking about nature. The artwork is great and compliments both
the theme and words of this poem. Hope you are doing well! Maria
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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This poem is lovely and sparks the inner child in me. The author's words
are interesting, uplifting and creative. I found these words inspiring and
thinking about nature. The artwork is great and compliments both
the theme and words of this poem. Hope you are doing well! Maria
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you. I spend a lot of time watching them.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wonderful rhymes and flow and I enjoyed they way you spent your day here in admiration of nature's tiniest creatures, live and let live, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Wonderful rhymes and flow and I enjoyed they way you spent your day here in admiration of nature's tiniest creatures, live and let live, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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They are fascinating. Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from tfawcus
What lovely scenes you show in your Roundabout poem. It's a form with a whimsical rhythm and you've integrated the repeats with great skill to make the most of their impact.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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What lovely scenes you show in your Roundabout poem. It's a form with a whimsical rhythm and you've integrated the repeats with great skill to make the most of their impact.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you, Tony. That means a lot to me.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a cute poem written in Roundabout poetry formation, that I am not familiar with, but seems to be an easy flowing form to use as in this poem. I, myself, am impressed with how this sweet poem played out. Thanks for sharing.
Patty
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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This is a cute poem written in Roundabout poetry formation, that I am not familiar with, but seems to be an easy flowing form to use as in this poem. I, myself, am impressed with how this sweet poem played out. Thanks for sharing.
Patty
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you for a great review and the lovely comment.
