Star Gazing
Is There?8 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A very reflective, gentle piece, which is accompanied by a beautiful image. Your syllables are correct and your words are well-chosen. Best wishes for the contest.
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A very reflective, gentle piece, which is accompanied by a beautiful image. Your syllables are correct and your words are well-chosen. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
How many people over thousands of years have looked up at the night sky and asked the very same question. Recently in the news we are finding out that there is something about outer space people coming to earth for years but the government covers it up. At least that's what I heard. Your question goes well with the picture. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
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How many people over thousands of years have looked up at the night sky and asked the very same question. Recently in the news we are finding out that there is something about outer space people coming to earth for years but the government covers it up. At least that's what I heard. Your question goes well with the picture. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from mobileliz
Nice picture. Gives the feeling that one is either searching for God or communing with HIM. The last line implies searching. I hope others can feel HIS presence with your words and choice of photo.
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Nice picture. Gives the feeling that one is either searching for God or communing with HIM. The last line implies searching. I hope others can feel HIS presence with your words and choice of photo.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
Comment from zanya
A teeny-weeny piece of poetry yet capable, with an appropriate arrangement of language, of asking one of the biggest questions our human minds can conjure up
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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A teeny-weeny piece of poetry yet capable, with an appropriate arrangement of language, of asking one of the biggest questions our human minds can conjure up
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Thanks for your review. A question that needs answers methinks.
Comment from pome lover
A thought-provoking 3-5-3, written simply and beautifully. A question humans have been asking for ages.
And from what the news has been telling and showing us - proof of UFOs, it looks like there is, and very advanced - technically, at least.
Good job and good luck in the contest.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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A thought-provoking 3-5-3, written simply and beautifully. A question humans have been asking for ages.
And from what the news has been telling and showing us - proof of UFOs, it looks like there is, and very advanced - technically, at least.
Good job and good luck in the contest.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Thanks for your review. Definitely a never-ending question.
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Great artwork to advance the author's idea. Format fitted. Who can sit and gaze up at the stars and not wonder about life up there? The sky is alive. The sun by day and the moon at night. Two great forces in the universe.
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Great artwork to advance the author's idea. Format fitted. Who can sit and gaze up at the stars and not wonder about life up there? The sky is alive. The sun by day and the moon at night. Two great forces in the universe.
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with one of the great unanswered questions.
Perhaps one day there will be contact
and the universe will open up
to a to stunning realization.
There is life among the myriad stars.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
with one of the great unanswered questions.
Perhaps one day there will be contact
and the universe will open up
to a to stunning realization.
There is life among the myriad stars.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Thanks for your review. Definitely a never-ending question.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is beautiful, Mystery Author--love the color scheme, the picture, and your thought provoking question to readers. Great job with the syllable count per line. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Your presentation is beautiful, Mystery Author--love the color scheme, the picture, and your thought provoking question to readers. Great job with the syllable count per line. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.