Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

The dewy drops will have their say before sun's rays sweep them away. Nature's cycle is perpetual and commanding. When once absorbed in wonder of it all, one cannot resist the advent of fall. You inspire poetry. Best wishes

 Comment Written 10-May-2021

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reply by the author on 10-May-2021

Thank you for the encouraging review and poetic feedback, cheers.

reply by Bonnie Seach on 10-May-2021

All the best

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
This is a lovely haiku.
You adhere to the requirements of the prompt and the picture you painted for me with your words is beautiful (stands perfectly without the artwork!)
Effective use of alliteration in lines 1&3 and nice assonance of S.
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 07-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks for the insightful review. I appreciate your thoughts on this one.
Have a great weekend, cheers, j

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

This is lovely! It also seems to meet all the requirements of the contest, which is good, because this is the first time I've seen such specific requirements.

Happy writing!

 Comment Written 07-May-2021

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reply by the author on 08-May-2021

Thanks for the review, have a great weekend, cheers, j