Words
Words have magic5 total reviews
Comment from Roberta Lawrinsky
Words are everywhere and they definitely come to life when written, when spoken, and when read. So I couldn't agree more. The scrabble letters are a match with your 3-5-3.
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Words are everywhere and they definitely come to life when written, when spoken, and when read. So I couldn't agree more. The scrabble letters are a match with your 3-5-3.
Comment Written 09-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from mobileliz
A great explanation of writing. The picture was a whimsical addition that added greatly to the piece. I wonder how many words you type and how many stories you make. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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A great explanation of writing. The picture was a whimsical addition that added greatly to the piece. I wonder how many words you type and how many stories you make. Good job.
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Thank you!
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You're very welcome
Comment from zanya
Yes let's hear it for words and their sheer and awesome power to convey our human moods and fears and longings but also to entertain ' make stories'- nice pic
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Yes let's hear it for words and their sheer and awesome power to convey our human moods and fears and longings but also to entertain ' make stories'- nice pic
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
that many on fanstory will relate to as writers and readers.
Words connect, move, expand and too many others things to list here.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest
that many on fanstory will relate to as writers and readers.
Words connect, move, expand and too many others things to list here.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from DentedSyke
This is such a tough format; one has to write and re-write (also, to read and re-read) to distill the essence of the message conveyed. I really wish that you had used the word "them" in the second line instead of "it." As for the third line, you might have been better off making it a continuation of the second line. This would add a flow to the poem. Still, a good poem in a tough format.
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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This is such a tough format; one has to write and re-write (also, to read and re-read) to distill the essence of the message conveyed. I really wish that you had used the word "them" in the second line instead of "it." As for the third line, you might have been better off making it a continuation of the second line. This would add a flow to the poem. Still, a good poem in a tough format.
Comment Written 07-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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I did the changes. Please check it again. Is it good now to give it five stars?
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Of course!
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
