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Tedious Turned Terrifying!

Drafts wills by day, writes screenplay by night

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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Clever isn't up my alley. I'm just a dumb old country boy running from the worms. They are crawling out of every orifice of my body and messing up my vision. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-May-2021


reply by the author on 07-May-2021
    I doubt she'll be coming here--figured it didn't hurt to suggest it. I needed a diversion from the topic at hand and thought it would be fun to think of titles.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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I'm the last person to suggest anything about a screenplay. I purposely write everything as a short work to stand on its own. My goal is to get someone to read one of my poems or stories and then say they want to read another one.


 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 07-May-2021
    I doubt she'll be coming here--figured it didn't hurt to suggest it. I needed a diversion from the topic at hand and thought it would be fun to think of titles.

    Your goal has been realized, at least as regards me.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 07-May-2021
    I will thank you for your willingness to read.
Comment from Judy Lawless
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That was an interesting and she sounds like a good lawyer who really gets to know her clients, and doesn't mind sharing her own personal story. Sorry, I have no suggestions for the title. That is my biggest problem with writing. I hope we get to see it.

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thanks Judy #15--you "earned" me a blue ribbon!

    I doubt she'll be coming here--figured it didn't hurt to suggest it. I needed a diversion from the topic at hand and thought it would be fun to think of titles.
Comment from DentedSyke
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Damn, Liz. Your life is a screenplay just waiting to be written. Your style of writing is addictive; I can't help but enjoy what you write. I'm so sorry about the tedium and the circumstances, but you seem to have a spirit made up of three parts unicorn and 4 parts bulldog. Keep on writing!

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thank you so much!

    Welcome to StoryLand. I stopped by your place earlier today and came upon your sssssstunning poem! Hope to see you again soon. Cheers. LIZ
reply by DentedSyke on 07-May-2021
    Of course!
Comment from judiverse
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Isn't it true that everyone is a writer? I think it sounds like a smart idea to consult a lawyer about your daughter's inheritance vs. government claims over medical costs. If she lost millions herself, I wonder how she is qualified to protect your daughter's financial interests. If she joins FS, she'll expect to be paid for those billable hours. She'll be surprised that she's the one who'll have to pay. judi

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Point taken about handling finances. The woman was devious.


    I doubt she'll be coming here--figured it didn't hurt to suggest it. I needed a diversion from the topic at hand and thought it would be fun to think of titles.
reply by judiverse on 07-May-2021
    I wish I'd get paid for the number of hours I spend on the site. You would certainly have amassed a fortune by now. judi
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is interesting about your lawyer. I enjoyed reading it. There seems to be so much corruption everywhere these days and has been for a long time--re--the paralegal. The screenplay sounds like it should be interesting, too. I don't believe you gave enough info for readers to suggest a title.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021

    I doubt she'll be coming here--figured it didn't hurt to suggest it. I needed a diversion from the topic at hand and thought it would be fun to think of titles.

    I should have made clear that the screenplay is about the theft of her assets.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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That would be quite torturous. But, isn't it a coincidence that she also writes? I gather you suggested she join Fan Story, which would be a benefit for her to get an idea as to who writing talent. I'm sure we will hear more. How does one connect with Netflix?

Ralf

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021

    I doubt she'll be coming here--figured it didn't hurt to suggest it. I needed a diversion from the topic at hand and thought it would be fun to think of titles.

    I should have made clear that the screenplay is about the theft of her assets.

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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Your life continues to astound me by its excitement. If I were you I would be living in a permanent state of exhaustion - zombieish! Does writing these things out help you to relax? I sincerely hope so.

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    StoryLand is my savior!

    I doubt she'll be coming here--figured it didn't hurt to suggest it. I needed a diversion from the topic at hand and thought it would be fun to think of titles.
Comment from muffinmama
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There you go again, being creative and encouraging and helpful and basically a lovely human being.
Is her paralegal not in prison? If not, why not? Enquiring minds want to know. Let's all help this poor woman. A title suggestion is the least we're capable of submitting, but not until we know something about the story. Give a heads-up when the script arrives.

Is that what Bonus Review means? God, I'm clueless sometimes - LOL

I hope she does a better job of protecting your daughter's inheritance than she did protecting her own assets.

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thanks for that! Right back at you.

    Point taken about handling finances. The woman was devious.

    I doubt she'll be coming here--figured it didn't hurt to suggest it. I needed a diversion from the topic at hand and thought it would be fun to think of titles.
Comment from Begin Again
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Your answer is a family trust... IRS or anyone else can not touch it and it's handled by the executor who takes care of it for the disabled person.

As for your attorney... hmm, I'm not so clear on the judgment (not recognizing a million dollars disappearing). she's not to intune to her own finances, let alone yours. Moving on!

A title for that screenplay -
"My Loss, Her Gain"
"Stupidity Strikes Again."
"Death by Deception"

Good luck with any of those. LOL Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Clever title picks! Point taken about handling finances. The woman was devious.

    I doubt she'll be coming here--figured it didn't hurt to suggest it. I needed a diversion from the topic at hand and thought it would be fun to think of titles.