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In The Clear

A Short Rhymed Poem

22 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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So pleased to hear that she is much better now and pain free. Our pets are such important members of the family. Hope she continues to make good progress. Your lovely poem is very well written, and conveys your various emotions very expressively. Well done.

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thank you, Wendy, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Aussie
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What a relief that Molly is OK. They are part of our family, when they hurt, we do to. Feel helpless not knowing what to do. Vets have gold-lined pockets, we still need them in times such as finding a lump. I put my boy down in February ($250) it was necessary, he was sixteen! K xx

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thank you again, dear Aussie, for your kind and thoughtful feedback and generous star rating. I truly appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is good news indeed and your pome celebrates more life for Molly who is on the mend, a touching story, well rhymed and metered, a joy to read Debra, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thank you, Dolly, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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It is so nice to hear Molly is well. This is a poem of love. It shows how you love Molly: the tender care of taking her to vet to make sure she is healed.

Love can heal everything. In the end: you are happy, Molly is happy and everyone else is happy. I am happy for both of you.

Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 06-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thank you for your lovely feedback. I really appreciate your warm comments. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Gloria ....
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Great news! And Molly has her favourite toy right there.

So glad to hear all worked out for you and your family, Debra.

An excellent poem, brimming with joy. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 05-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thank you so much, Gloria, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sally Law
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Whew! So glad to hear this. Have something special and celebrate. I'm so glad everything is okay! What a dog! Sending you my best today as always, and to Molly,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 05-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thank you, Sal, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Good news! Thank you Debra--I needed that--I just heard two heartrending dead dog stories today--such a charming verse--tail ran out of wag--so clever!

 Comment Written 05-May-2021


reply by the author on 06-May-2021
    Thank you, Liz, for your lovely feedback. Glad to share happy news with you and give you a reprieve from the bad... Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Ritasher
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Aww! So glad the Molly is okay. Your poem presents a clear story and it is well rhymed, a lovely picture chosen as well. It is simple, yet sweet and radiates an explicit emotion.

 Comment Written 05-May-2021


reply by the author on 05-May-2021
    Thank you so much, Ritasher, for your lovely feedback :)
    Best wishes, Debra
Comment from royowen
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Ist that marvellous news Debra, but I wonder what the listlessness was about, they aren't usually lethargic without a reason Oh well, your prayers worked, be blessed. A wonderfully scribed ballad poem, smooth and articulate, well rhymed in abcb, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-May-2021


reply by the author on 05-May-2021
    Hi Roy :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. The first time we had Molly to the vet, she had a temperature and we were given some paracetamol and antibiotics - she picked up after a few doses of that - we think she had some kind of virus initially...
    Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by royowen on 05-May-2021
    Isn?t that great, they are very precious.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, In the Clear, lets the readership know that Molly the springer spaniel has a benign lump on her leg and not something lethal. Nice.

 Comment Written 05-May-2021


reply by the author on 05-May-2021
    Thank you, Bill :) Best wishes, Debra