Zoo
when people stare at you3 total reviews
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Great location and topic! Nicely expressed in this loop poem. Good rhyme scheme and rhythm. Artwork makes the reader feel what it's like to be stared at! Well done and joy to you
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Great location and topic! Nicely expressed in this loop poem. Good rhyme scheme and rhythm. Artwork makes the reader feel what it's like to be stared at! Well done and joy to you
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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thanks for the review
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Best wishes
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Oh my god. I'm never going to the zoo again. Those poor animals, lol. That picture made me so uncomfortable.
Very clever Loop Poem. Creative take on it. Best of luck in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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Oh my god. I'm never going to the zoo again. Those poor animals, lol. That picture made me so uncomfortable.
Very clever Loop Poem. Creative take on it. Best of luck in the voting booth.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 07-May-2021
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thanks for the review
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Shawn, good loop poem, your lines have good connection, you make me feel like I'm on display in a zoo, and sometimes you can't hide behind a potted plant. Dove good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Dear Shawn, good loop poem, your lines have good connection, you make me feel like I'm on display in a zoo, and sometimes you can't hide behind a potted plant. Dove good luck in the contest
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thanks for the review
