The First Bite of Sorrow
A poem about sorrow6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we first experience sorrow it can be quite devastating as our world falls apart, but we learn to cope in time, it only made me stronger, fine words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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When we first experience sorrow it can be quite devastating as our world falls apart, but we learn to cope in time, it only made me stronger, fine words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
Comment from Dr. Nad
The First Bite of Sorrow Is a strong entry for the 20 syllable poem contest. Sorrow is the subject we like to relegate to the moments of necessity, like the one depicted in this poem. Bereavement, however, is an ongoing challenge that accompanies each of us through the ages and stages of our life. The real question for us is how is it working for us?
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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The First Bite of Sorrow Is a strong entry for the 20 syllable poem contest. Sorrow is the subject we like to relegate to the moments of necessity, like the one depicted in this poem. Bereavement, however, is an ongoing challenge that accompanies each of us through the ages and stages of our life. The real question for us is how is it working for us?
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
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You are most welcome, it was my pleasure.
Comment from Sharon Davis
This 20 syllable poem conveys deep emotion and uses vivid, well chosen imagery to trigger a deeply emotional response in the reader. The tone of the piece is somber and the theme, one of sorrow and pain. The artwork accompanying the piece is powerful as well. Great work.
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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This 20 syllable poem conveys deep emotion and uses vivid, well chosen imagery to trigger a deeply emotional response in the reader. The tone of the piece is somber and the theme, one of sorrow and pain. The artwork accompanying the piece is powerful as well. Great work.
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Well written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Well written. The sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
Comment from lyenochka
That fully describes how terribly a mother suffers in losing a child. But the "his body" could also be the father's so the relationship is not clear from the words here. But the title shows us how the realization of death is that "first bite of sorrow." Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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That fully describes how terribly a mother suffers in losing a child. But the "his body" could also be the father's so the relationship is not clear from the words here. But the title shows us how the realization of death is that "first bite of sorrow." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. I would like to follow your writing but I do not know how to be notified when you post.
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Just click on my name - lyenochka and when it takes you to my profile, click on Become a Fan. That's how I got to get notified of your postings.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Losses are not a good thing, but they do make for good emotional contest entries. Thank you for sharing this one short one with us. I wish you the best of luck but I need more than 20 syllables for a review. LOL
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Losses are not a good thing, but they do make for good emotional contest entries. Thank you for sharing this one short one with us. I wish you the best of luck but I need more than 20 syllables for a review. LOL
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Thanks, I was thinking 20 words
