Look before you Leap!
Our memories are meant to help us.54 total reviews
Comment from Vanna1
I like your poem's message. It is of great importance that we revisit our past sometimes to evaluate understanding and how we could better ourselves. Good rhyme presentation as well. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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I like your poem's message. It is of great importance that we revisit our past sometimes to evaluate understanding and how we could better ourselves. Good rhyme presentation as well. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hey Vanna, I appreciate your words of affirmation and transparent assessment. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Thank you as well for the five beautiful stars! Embrace the love from Above!
Comment from papa55mike
I've found in my life that I remember too late. I remember saying that before after I've shot off my mouth. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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I've found in my life that I remember too late. I remember saying that before after I've shot off my mouth. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hey Mike, I will confess, since you have led a the way. A GRAMPS and a Papa haven't got it all together. We still have a way to go before we achieve a gold crown. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Thank you as well for the five beautiful stars! Embrace the love from Above!
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
I really like this thought provoking poem about considering past decisions and the joy or consequences they brought, as we create new memories. Perhaps we can learn from our mistakes. Very well written, easy to read, mind capturing. Excellent work, illustration was perfect for memories.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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I really like this thought provoking poem about considering past decisions and the joy or consequences they brought, as we create new memories. Perhaps we can learn from our mistakes. Very well written, easy to read, mind capturing. Excellent work, illustration was perfect for memories.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
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Hey Kerry, Your words are so kind and illuminating as to impact assessment. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Thank you as well for the five beautiful stars! Embrace the love from Above!
Comment from TheTurtleDude
This is a really good poem. I totally agree that some memories may be good, but others may just be there to teach us. Good luck in the contest!
Best Wishes,
TheTurtleDude
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This is a really good poem. I totally agree that some memories may be good, but others may just be there to teach us. Good luck in the contest!
Best Wishes,
TheTurtleDude
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hey Dude, a two sided coin is good currency, isn't it? Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Thank you as well for the five beautiful stars! Embrace the love from Above!
Comment from Sally Law
Hello there, Dr. Nad. A fine poem you have here with an important word of caution within. We should have pain memory--like not to touch fire and be burned. These things teach us as you say.
Sending you a wonderful day,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hello there, Dr. Nad. A fine poem you have here with an important word of caution within. We should have pain memory--like not to touch fire and be burned. These things teach us as you say.
Sending you a wonderful day,
Sal :))
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hey Girl, you picked up what I was puttin down! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Thank you as well for the five beautiful stars! Embrace the love from Above!
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You are most welcome. Blessings, good doctor. :))
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I only became intentional in my personal growth when I turned 59 years of age. It was then that I started working on myself, and my memories before that were all filed: under emotion. Since then, they are filed: under instruction. Your author's notes were quite clear, and I wanted to answer that.
As far as the poem is concerned, I love it all and especially the last line, which spoke to me, "before leaping: Investigate!"
I always use this advice to the best of my knowledge. The artwork fits the piece to a tee! Thank you for sharing your wise advice and letting me share my life with you.
Have a great evening,
Jesse
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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I only became intentional in my personal growth when I turned 59 years of age. It was then that I started working on myself, and my memories before that were all filed: under emotion. Since then, they are filed: under instruction. Your author's notes were quite clear, and I wanted to answer that.
As far as the poem is concerned, I love it all and especially the last line, which spoke to me, "before leaping: Investigate!"
I always use this advice to the best of my knowledge. The artwork fits the piece to a tee! Thank you for sharing your wise advice and letting me share my life with you.
Have a great evening,
Jesse
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hey Jesse, your words are both introspective and affirming. RARE! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Thank you as well for the five beautiful stars! Embrace the love from Above!
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You are very welcome, Dr. Nad. I am glad you liked and found value in my review.
Have a good evening,
Jesse
Comment from Lordinajamjar
Lol
I enjoyed this good doctor. It is certainly a prescription for the soul, with a good dose of wisdom for good measure.
I believe this should do rather well in the contest. Good luck.
Best
John
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Lol
I enjoyed this good doctor. It is certainly a prescription for the soul, with a good dose of wisdom for good measure.
I believe this should do rather well in the contest. Good luck.
Best
John
Comment Written 03-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hey John, Your words and actions are both kind and generous. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Please receive my heart-felt appreciation for the six beautiful stars! All of us here on FanStory are attempting to be writers of impact! Your rating this entry as Exceptional, encourages me to believe that this entry makes a difference. Embrace the love from Above!
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent rhyming poem with some good, sound advice that would benefit everyone to consider and follow. I also like the picture you have chosen to accent your message. What joy!
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This is an excellent rhyming poem with some good, sound advice that would benefit everyone to consider and follow. I also like the picture you have chosen to accent your message. What joy!
Comment Written 03-May-2021
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Hey Spangle, you have affirmed and encouraged me today! Noted and appreciated! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Thank you as well for the five beautiful stars! Embrace the love from Above!
Comment from June Sargent
These words of wisdom should be heeded - especially in the world we live in today. Learning from the past, our failures as well as our successes, can prevent mistakes and regrets. We need to act wisely - and not just react rashly. You've provided much food for thought.
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These words of wisdom should be heeded - especially in the world we live in today. Learning from the past, our failures as well as our successes, can prevent mistakes and regrets. We need to act wisely - and not just react rashly. You've provided much food for thought.
Comment Written 03-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hey June, almost all of us write for impact and memories provide a lasting impact. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Thank you as well for the five beautiful stars! Embrace the love from Above!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written rhyming poem. It has a great flow and nice overall presentation. Nice photo to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a nicely written rhyming poem. It has a great flow and nice overall presentation. Nice photo to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hey Joanne, do you think the photographer was thinking of this poem when they choreographed that jump? LOL Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review: "Look before you Leap." Thank you as well for the five beautiful stars! Embrace the love from Above!
