Haiku 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Fine Dining"Haiku Club Submissions 2021
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Comment from Sharon Davis
This haiku poem, in response to animal families prompt, is informative and witty. I was unaware that a group of otters is referred to as a family. The image of a seafood feast resonates effectively. Nicely presented.
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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This haiku poem, in response to animal families prompt, is informative and witty. I was unaware that a group of otters is referred to as a family. The image of a seafood feast resonates effectively. Nicely presented.
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Thank you, Sharon, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, Debra.
-You did a good job
with your haiku and
the otters and their
"family feast."
-I think they are enjoying it.
-A good satori line, too.
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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-Nice image and
presentation, Debra.
-You did a good job
with your haiku and
the otters and their
"family feast."
-I think they are enjoying it.
-A good satori line, too.
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Hi Pam :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra :)
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You are very welcome, Debra.
Comment from Gloria ....
Yay! With your fine NaPo project finished you are now on to new adventures. The otters are such fun, and you have captured that perfectly, and a raw fish dinner almost sound appetizing. lol
Excellent haiku, and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Yay! With your fine NaPo project finished you are now on to new adventures. The otters are such fun, and you have captured that perfectly, and a raw fish dinner almost sound appetizing. lol
Excellent haiku, and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Thanks so much, Gloria :) Yes, it's lovely to catch up with some of the club events I have missed! Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Good one--very clever--even without the brilliant double-play on family. Thanks for notes on that Great alliteration family/feast/fed/fish. (A group of crows is called a "murder"--someone recently had fun with that one!)
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Good one--very clever--even without the brilliant double-play on family. Thanks for notes on that Great alliteration family/feast/fed/fish. (A group of crows is called a "murder"--someone recently had fun with that one!)
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Thanks, Liz :) Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Fine Dining
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
What a adorable.... a family. I really like your group of animals haiku. I've been having a lot of fun reading all the entries. I love the presentation and imagery too. :) Well done!
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Fine Dining
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
What a adorable.... a family. I really like your group of animals haiku. I've been having a lot of fun reading all the entries. I love the presentation and imagery too. :) Well done!
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Gypsy :) Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
We have a family of otters on the lake where we live. They are the cutest things. We've never been able to snap a picture though. They are wild, fast, and slippery. They are always together.
Sweet poem for today, and aptly illustrated too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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We have a family of otters on the lake where we live. They are the cutest things. We've never been able to snap a picture though. They are wild, fast, and slippery. They are always together.
Sweet poem for today, and aptly illustrated too.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Hey Sal :) How lovely to have a lake on your doorstep - I keep forgetting that! Thanks for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :) x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is surprising to me how much food there is for these larger sea creatures but I expect fish breed quite quickly, so there is always a food source, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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It is surprising to me how much food there is for these larger sea creatures but I expect fish breed quite quickly, so there is always a food source, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Thank you, Dolly :) Glad you enjoyed...! Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from lyenochka
That's a lot of alliteration (family -feast on hand-fed fish) in this little haiku! I like that the otters are called "family" - they always seem so happy and friendly. Great job!
At last, April is over and we can get to our other challenges in clubs etc!
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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That's a lot of alliteration (family -feast on hand-fed fish) in this little haiku! I like that the otters are called "family" - they always seem so happy and friendly. Great job!
At last, April is over and we can get to our other challenges in clubs etc!
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Hi Helen :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. As much as I enjoyed participating in the contest, it is nice to catch up with the club events I missed over the last month! Best wishes as always. Debra x
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I felt this poem was not only engaging but found a healthy message stated! The artwork is perfect and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I felt this poem was not only engaging but found a healthy message stated! The artwork is perfect and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise ekphrastic poem is vividly descriptive--very well done.
It tells of how one creature in nature survives by devouring another creature.
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Your ultra-concise ekphrastic poem is vividly descriptive--very well done.
It tells of how one creature in nature survives by devouring another creature.
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 03-May-2021
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Thank you, Janice, for your feedback :) Best wishes, Debra
