Final Destination
Truth hurts as much as lies6 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
This poem smacked my face with a wet mop of reality. Spitting grimy suds as I sputter, mesmerized, a complete stranger could know me so well. LOL. Dying truly is the easiest part of living, for those who linger in torment to find the escape to where and whatever. As I've often said, I spent my whole life chasing all the things I thought were important, while missing out on all the things that truly should have been. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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This poem smacked my face with a wet mop of reality. Spitting grimy suds as I sputter, mesmerized, a complete stranger could know me so well. LOL. Dying truly is the easiest part of living, for those who linger in torment to find the escape to where and whatever. As I've often said, I spent my whole life chasing all the things I thought were important, while missing out on all the things that truly should have been. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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you know what...your reviews literally made my year...you didn't have to review them, but you did and it really does mean the world that someone 'gets me'....in this and the other poem you reviewed...I cannot thanks you enough love Meia xx ps: This was one poetic review! Lol. Almost a stand-alone poem in itself! Thankyou again!
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Writers use every trick in their tool kits to reach and keep us coming back for more. Although, extremely well written, it's your openness and honesty that overwhelms me. It's a pleasure to read your work.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Meia, wanted to wait until I got a six to review you my beautiful friend...
I guess I look at my life sweet girl...and
no matter good or bad...like it or not...it
made me who I am today...and I haven't died yet...
even though there were times I wished I had...
but with Gods help I got through...but what I do believe... death heaven is the place I want to end up at...a great place to be...
as far as catching love...unless it is a true love...
it's not worth losing my breath for...sigh...
I love your poem sweet you...and love the picture...
so very well written...much love...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Hi Meia, wanted to wait until I got a six to review you my beautiful friend...
I guess I look at my life sweet girl...and
no matter good or bad...like it or not...it
made me who I am today...and I haven't died yet...
even though there were times I wished I had...
but with Gods help I got through...but what I do believe... death heaven is the place I want to end up at...a great place to be...
as far as catching love...unless it is a true love...
it's not worth losing my breath for...sigh...
I love your poem sweet you...and love the picture...
so very well written...much love...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thankyou my darling friend. You touch my heart. I honestly cannot say how grateful I am to you. Thankyou a billion times sweetheart xxxx all my love Meia xx
Comment from nomi338
This poem is very deep. It shows a deep longing to understand some of the mysteries of life, love and the act of surviving. As a man of some advanced age, (78 years and counting) life hurts more than death because, at death everything is halted, no more pain, no more pleasure. No more anything. Meanwhile life will continue to sting you until the final sting, resulting in death.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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This poem is very deep. It shows a deep longing to understand some of the mysteries of life, love and the act of surviving. As a man of some advanced age, (78 years and counting) life hurts more than death because, at death everything is halted, no more pain, no more pleasure. No more anything. Meanwhile life will continue to sting you until the final sting, resulting in death.
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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bless you as always, you are a very special person and writer.kindest regards M.
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Thanks for that. You inspire me greatly.
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same, feeling it;s mutual, i'm honored!
Comment from Boogienights
This poem has a sadness in it, but also a truth about life, death, disappointment. Many go through life chasing dreams that won't come through, experience pain and heartbreak. Still, life is worth living in my humble opinion. This is a thought provoking and extremely well written piece. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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This poem has a sadness in it, but also a truth about life, death, disappointment. Many go through life chasing dreams that won't come through, experience pain and heartbreak. Still, life is worth living in my humble opinion. This is a thought provoking and extremely well written piece. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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THANKYOU so much. You are a consistently kind and fair reviewer and you give real insight in your reviews, bless you! love Meia xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Because we don't know the timing of our own death, it is not something we should worry about. It is far better to concentrate on living each moment as if it is our last. Our final destination is unpredictable and we always hope it is painless, fine words here Maia, delivered with elegance, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Because we don't know the timing of our own death, it is not something we should worry about. It is far better to concentrate on living each moment as if it is our last. Our final destination is unpredictable and we always hope it is painless, fine words here Maia, delivered with elegance, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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thankyou Dolly as always you are very kind regards Meia :)
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Correction of punctuation is necessary. A sad reflection is noted in this poem. Positivity would make it lighter and leave the reader with a brighter countenance. The author's intention is nevertheless respected.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Correction of punctuation is necessary. A sad reflection is noted in this poem. Positivity would make it lighter and leave the reader with a brighter countenance. The author's intention is nevertheless respected.
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Thankyou Bonnie, I really appreciate the feedback and would appreciate any punctuation mistake 'corrections' however the tone of sadness is very much part of the poem and a true reflection of my feelings. If it leaves the reader feeling sad it would have that in common with many other poems, and I would not be looking to change that as it is intended to show distress at a world void of truth and meaning. kindest regards Meia :)
