Comment from kmoss

Exceptional

I love this! It's perfect. It three line and such a low syllable count, you managed to convey a romantic evening. The title is fitting and great. So far this one gets my vote but I have three more to read!

 Comment Written 02-May-2021

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reply by the author on 02-May-2021

Thank you so much! I'm not doing very well in the voting, but I humbly appreciate your encouraging and thoughtful comments. You just made my day. :-) Hugs.

reply by kmoss on 02-May-2021

After reading the rest, I did vote for it!

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

Love the title that you chose for your 2-4-2. The poem itself is strong and perfectly defines the title. Beautifully illustrated. Well done! Best wishes!

 Comment Written 01-May-2021

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reply by the author on 01-May-2021

Thank you so much. Isn't there something magical about the night? I appreciate that you read my poem, and thank you so much for your comments and review. Hugs.

reply by C. Gale Burnett on 02-May-2021

Yes there is, and you are so welcome!

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Oh, dear. That wake-up call is like stepping into a cold shower sometimes. There's a magic half-light in the moon that conceals much that cannot stand the light of day!

 Comment Written 01-May-2021

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reply by the author on 01-May-2021

Ain't that the truth? :-) Thank you for your comments and review. Hugs.

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

Wow! You've managed to pack a romantic tryst and its aftermath into just eight syllables. That's ... well, magical!

I think you have a good chance of winning the prompt. Good luck

Stay safe healthy and blessed

Julia

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021

Thank you so much, Julia, for your supportive and encouraging comments and review. I never win these haiku-like contests. I'm just learning, but it's very fun! Thanks again. Hugs and blessings.

reply by juliaSjames on 30-Apr-2021

Hah! Bite your tongue poet! :-))