Comment from Bonnie Seach

Average

The format for this type of poem is not clear. The wording is pleasant.The intention has potential.Poetry has many formats; shapes and sizes. To excel as a poet, one needs to master the rhythm, meter, rhyme schemes and various patterns. Rather like a painter mastering the colours and textures of paint on his palette

 Comment Written 01-May-2021

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reply by the author on 01-May-2021

It?s a 2-4-2 .. 8 syllables

..I was not aware that this format had to rhyme. My bad

The message I thought was clear , just the same.

To build a better world ( which is written in the artwork in big letters) ..
love is the answer.

Love is the main ingredient..


I received another review minutes before yours and she got it clearly ..here is what she wrote:



Hello :)
I like how you incorporated your title into the poem - clever, that!
It does sound a bit corny (you said it!) but it's true nonetheless :)
Good luck in the voting booth.

Anyways, opinions differ ..that s what makes the world colourful.

Keep safe and I hope you have a peaceful Sunday.

reply by Bonnie Seach on 01-May-2021

The poem is a 2-4-2 poem. This is not cclear. It didn't have to rhyme. We are encouraged to read the rules for our entries in contests. I followed the rules for this kind of poem

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
I like how you incorporated your title into the poem - clever, that!
It does sound a bit corny (you said it!) but it's true nonetheless :)
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 01-May-2021

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reply by the author on 01-May-2021

Thanks for the positive feedback ..

glad you connected the artwork writing to the poem



Keep safe!