Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw

Excellent

Thanks for this great poem. I would also like to send my messages to my late mother on the wings of a butterfly, over fields of bluebells under cobalt skies. Thanks for sharing and wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 13-May-2021

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reply by the author on 18-May-2021

Thanks for the review. My 93 year old mom lives about 2 miles from me, but I still cannot visit her. I thought of what a bird would see flying from me to her. The St. Lawrence river and Rougemont where we grow apples in Quebec.
Have a great day, cheers, j

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a vivid use of words that makes your poem an excellent Mother's Day poem. I like your middles verse about elements of nature, it adds to the feel of love for your mother. Excellent use of words.

 Comment Written 01-May-2021

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reply by the author on 01-May-2021

Thanks for the insightful review. She is in Montreal and I am a couple hours away in townships. No one is allowed to visit. I just imagined a bird's eye view if it flew from my place to hers. The St Lawrence river and apple country would be seen.
I hope it makes her smile, cheers, j

Comment from Sharon Davis

Exceptional

This Mother's Day poem is exquisitely composed, and presented with the perfect backdrop and artwork. It is the total package. The descriptive language that is incorporated throughout paints a vivid picture of a butterfly being sent on a mission of love, with a message from a child for his or her mother. Well done!

 Comment Written 01-May-2021

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reply by the author on 01-May-2021

Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars. Yeah I miss my mom only a couple hours away but I cannot visit just now. I imagined what a bird would see flying from my house to hers, haha
Have a nice weekend, j