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na-po-wri-mo contest

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Comment from pome lover
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What a lovely and final poem for the contest.
From your words it seems you have learned a lot and probably tried all the poetry forms. And you can name them all, too. Bravo.
Very nice, listing all the things you're grateful for from the members of Fan Story. good goin'.
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 03-May-2021


reply by the author on 04-May-2021
    Dear Katharine. thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by pome lover on 04-May-2021
    most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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This is a perfect ending to your Napowrimo project - giving tribute to our Fanstory family here. It is a very helpful site where we all improve in our writing. I like how you were able to add in all those different types of poetry, too. Congratulatons on finishing!!

 Comment Written 03-May-2021


reply by the author on 04-May-2021
    Dear lyenochka, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from ~Dovey
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What a wonderful tribute, Donna. I know that everyone will appreciate your efforts in recognizing this wonderful source of critique and inspiration.

Great job on finishing NaPoWriMo!

Kim

 Comment Written 01-May-2021


reply by the author on 01-May-2021
    Hi Kim, thanks for your comments and review. I am breathing a sigh of relief for being able to finish the contest - started April 15, so had to do two poems a day! Donna
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed reading your heartfelt tribute, Dove. Your lines are smooth flowing, the image works well, and I can tell your words are straight from your heart. I like the way you address readers and the many examples you gave of the styles you enjoy. This is a perfect way to wrap your book!
Thank you for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-May-2021
    Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from judiverse
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Lovely tribute to FanStory members. You mention some of the different poetic forms that we learn about on FanStory. There are so many to keep track of, and members invent delightful new forms. You also mention that the reviewers are a big help to with the suggestions they make. I think the most uplifting part is the opportunity to write and interact with your readers. Great work, and best of luck in the poem a day contest. Just to finish is quite an accomplishment! judi

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
    Dear judi, thank you for your comments and review and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a wonderful tribute to all poets who write on Fanstory and the help you have received from some of them and I enjoyed your kind words, well said, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
    Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. You've done well with this. Great overall presentation. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
    Dear Joanne, thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of specific, vivid details, examples, in this
moving, sincere tribute to your fellow poets on Fan Story. The challenges of prompts have also helped me to branch out.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
    Dear Janice, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Begin Again
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Your poem is a perfect ending to your book.. thanking and remembering all the others who have helped and guided you through the hallways of writing poetry. I know nothing of the technicalities except for enjoying what I read. Best of luck!

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
    Dear Begin Again, thank you for your comments and review. and good luck wishes Dove
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
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Hi dovemarie

Simply brilliant. A perfect tribute to the other fanstorians on the site. Saying that I don't think I have reviewed any of your work.

Skilfully written from beginning to end.
Take care, Pete

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
    Dear Pete, thank you for your 6 stars and your comments and review! Dove