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Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Conversation With Calliope"na-po-wri-mo contest
12 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, exciting, and creative. Thank you
for the author's notes - I would have never known what Calliope is!
The poem flows and connects well. I enjoyed the topic! The artwork
is awesome! Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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The author's words are engaging, exciting, and creative. Thank you
for the author's notes - I would have never known what Calliope is!
The poem flows and connects well. I enjoyed the topic! The artwork
is awesome! Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Dear Maria, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Very nice. Great, vivd language packed into a short but sweet piece of work. The picture to go along with it is quite interesting as well.
Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Very nice. Great, vivd language packed into a short but sweet piece of work. The picture to go along with it is quite interesting as well.
Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Dear Erika, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from royowen
I'm forced to admit that I didn't know that, but one is reputed to learn something everyday, it also means beautifully-voiced, which certainly applies to my elder daughter. Beautifully written post as a tanka, with a solid pivot line, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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I'm forced to admit that I didn't know that, but one is reputed to learn something everyday, it also means beautifully-voiced, which certainly applies to my elder daughter. Beautifully written post as a tanka, with a solid pivot line, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Dear Roy, thank you for your comments and review. Blessings to you too! Dove
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like your muse is working overtime lately and creating some unusually and fine writes, I enjoyed the Greek coming out in you here, much fun, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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It sounds like your muse is working overtime lately and creating some unusually and fine writes, I enjoyed the Greek coming out in you here, much fun, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Hi Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Conversation with Calliope, looks good and reminds us of this muse's gifts and that such inspirations are welcome.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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This tanka, Conversation with Calliope, looks good and reminds us of this muse's gifts and that such inspirations are welcome.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Dear Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this appealing, descriptive piece about the love of writing, being stimulated to carve out poems.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this appealing, descriptive piece about the love of writing, being stimulated to carve out poems.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Dear Janice, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an interesting piece of art to pair with your well-written tanka contest entry, Dove. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the style of tanka. Your words are well thought out, flow smoothly, and create good imagery. I enjoyed reading it.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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This is an interesting piece of art to pair with your well-written tanka contest entry, Dove. I enjoyed reading it. Good job with the style of tanka. Your words are well thought out, flow smoothly, and create good imagery. I enjoyed reading it.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The focal word in this poem is Carving. What a dynamic imagery this creates, how many ways, many things we can carve. I like the alliteration you have used. You have strong metaphors. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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The focal word in this poem is Carving. What a dynamic imagery this creates, how many ways, many things we can carve. I like the alliteration you have used. You have strong metaphors. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Dear Liz, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Rose Reese
Im loving the overall theme of this piece the last line threw me off a bit at first I don't even know why but after reading it a few times I've come to the conclusion That this is a work of art!
Keep up your hard work!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Im loving the overall theme of this piece the last line threw me off a bit at first I don't even know why but after reading it a few times I've come to the conclusion That this is a work of art!
Keep up your hard work!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Dear Rose, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sharon Davis
I enjoyed this Tanka poem. The imagery it creates forms a picture of you sitting down, perhaps with a cup of coffee hashing out some poetry together. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed this Tanka poem. The imagery it creates forms a picture of you sitting down, perhaps with a cup of coffee hashing out some poetry together. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Dear Sharon, thanks for your comments and review. Dove
