The Walkers
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Comment from DentedSyke
Warriors for Christ? I can't say I liked the story much, but I also think the writing is good and contains very interesting characters for a longer story - maybe even a novel. As it is, the story feels disjointed and forced. A little too much back story for the limited number of words allowed here. Again, I think it would make a terrific novel because the two lead perotagonists are intriguing.
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reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Warriors for Christ? I can't say I liked the story much, but I also think the writing is good and contains very interesting characters for a longer story - maybe even a novel. As it is, the story feels disjointed and forced. A little too much back story for the limited number of words allowed here. Again, I think it would make a terrific novel because the two lead perotagonists are intriguing.
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Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words! I'll be by to read.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Keep on writing! You have talent!
Comment from Bonnie Seach
An undertaking of note -- this story. Emotion is there, compassion too and a modicum of violence. The author knows his small arms. May this account benefit young people, especially young, vulnerable women. I would like to read the story once more after it has been edited. I see the need for improvement with writing technique, skills and style
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reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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An undertaking of note -- this story. Emotion is there, compassion too and a modicum of violence. The author knows his small arms. May this account benefit young people, especially young, vulnerable women. I would like to read the story once more after it has been edited. I see the need for improvement with writing technique, skills and style
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Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hi, Bonnie. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Thank you for your reply. Best wishes
Comment from Siddhi Sharma
Awsm i guess it was a brilliant story which has learning, awareness and how to behave and it is necessary
I think.............. Overall it was superb
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Awsm i guess it was a brilliant story which has learning, awareness and how to behave and it is necessary
I think.............. Overall it was superb
Comment Written 05-May-2021
reply by the author on 08-May-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
