The Vision
Can you see it?24 total reviews
Comment from Senyai
Hi PHarp,
Absolutely beautiful work here. The whole package from the artwork to your golden words brought it home for me. I love your choice of words through out the poem, expressing the anticipation of Christ's Second Coming that vibrated through you and was so beautifully conveyed to the reader. Perfect in content and presentation!
Best wishes,
Senyai
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Hi PHarp,
Absolutely beautiful work here. The whole package from the artwork to your golden words brought it home for me. I love your choice of words through out the poem, expressing the anticipation of Christ's Second Coming that vibrated through you and was so beautifully conveyed to the reader. Perfect in content and presentation!
Best wishes,
Senyai
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Senyai,
Thank you for such an outstanding review, six-star rating, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated,
Have a great day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Ginnygray
Portia, this is a great poem describing Jesus' second coming. A revelation of hope has begun is a favorite line. Another captivating line is, "Hatred, deceit and lies are disposed of"! To get a crown one must labor in love was another line that was meaningful! The last one though says it all, " Belief is knowing He's in control", every minute of every day!!!
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Portia, this is a great poem describing Jesus' second coming. A revelation of hope has begun is a favorite line. Another captivating line is, "Hatred, deceit and lies are disposed of"! To get a crown one must labor in love was another line that was meaningful! The last one though says it all, " Belief is knowing He's in control", every minute of every day!!!
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Ginnygray,
Thank you for such an outstanding review, six-star rating, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated,
I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Have a great day.
Blessings and a Big Hug...Portia
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great rhyming and an easy to read poem. When we know that God is in control, life is worth living. So glad for the salvation He freely offers us and for the hope of His return.
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Great rhyming and an easy to read poem. When we know that God is in control, life is worth living. So glad for the salvation He freely offers us and for the hope of His return.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Anne,
Thank you for your review and very kind and wise comments.
Hugs...Portia
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You are welcome
Comment from Janet Foor
A wonderful message in your beautiful heartfelt poem Portia.
The last two lines say it all.
This vision of God's realm graces my soul
Belief is knowing, He's in control.
Beautiful.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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A wonderful message in your beautiful heartfelt poem Portia.
The last two lines say it all.
This vision of God's realm graces my soul
Belief is knowing, He's in control.
Beautiful.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Janet,
Thanks so much for your review and comments. You are always so kind.
Hugs...Portia
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very inspiring spiritual poem beautifully presented. You praise God's supreme powers and vision and the beauty of His realm.
Great artwork and a superb presentation. Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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A very inspiring spiritual poem beautifully presented. You praise God's supreme powers and vision and the beauty of His realm.
Great artwork and a superb presentation. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from elchupakabra
I think that you could remove the first line semi colon, it is not required - I also think if you're going to have phrasing with periods and capitals you should maintain this throughout the piece rather than capitalize every first word of every line, ex:
A vision of God's realm graces my soul
exploring the bliss of nature's loopholes.
The beauty of creation to extol
belief is knowing He is in control.
Otherwise good work here, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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I think that you could remove the first line semi colon, it is not required - I also think if you're going to have phrasing with periods and capitals you should maintain this throughout the piece rather than capitalize every first word of every line, ex:
A vision of God's realm graces my soul
exploring the bliss of nature's loopholes.
The beauty of creation to extol
belief is knowing He is in control.
Otherwise good work here, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Thank you for your review and comments, and suggestions; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a great day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A beautifully penned poem formatted very well. Touches the heart. Be brave enough to live the life of your dreams according to your vision, with a prayer in your heart and Faith in Him. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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A beautifully penned poem formatted very well. Touches the heart. Be brave enough to live the life of your dreams according to your vision, with a prayer in your heart and Faith in Him. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Seshadri,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a great day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Boogienights
This is a beautifully written poem about faith and the promise of salvation. I reallyike the way you formatted your poem and the love picture you chose. It fits your words perfectly. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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This is a beautifully written poem about faith and the promise of salvation. I reallyike the way you formatted your poem and the love picture you chose. It fits your words perfectly. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 25-May-2021
reply by the author on 25-May-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Have a great day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Powerful poem with a strong message of faith as you place your trust and confidence in God above. I love the section where Archangel Michael gives satan a shove. Excellent choice of words. Great job!
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Powerful poem with a strong message of faith as you place your trust and confidence in God above. I love the section where Archangel Michael gives satan a shove. Excellent choice of words. Great job!
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Kerry,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. This is a beautiful poem. Your rhyme flows nicely.
And your words give spiritual comfort to the reader, thank you for sharing.
~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Hello there, my friend. This is a beautiful poem. Your rhyme flows nicely.
And your words give spiritual comfort to the reader, thank you for sharing.
~Kerry
Comment Written 24-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Kerry,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
