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Packaged By God

Thinking outside the box.

7 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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This short prose is a testament to your faith. It does remind us to be thankful for our gifts and to try to use them in the way they were meant to be used. Such gifts are childred, artistic ability of any kind and much more.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan

 Comment Written 13-May-2021


reply by the author on 14-May-2021
    Thanks for your review.
reply by dragonpoet on 15-May-2021
    My pleasure.
    Joan
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a great way of putting it. When we use the gifts God has given us we are so much happier than doing something for the money because it pays well or some other selfish reason. Our natural talents we should never take lightly, and like you say, we discover other things over time they feel natural to us.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
    I have had many talents over the years but now many of those things I can no longer do because of failing eyesight.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Gifted by God, what a wonderful story, is so wonderful that you can witness and feel his holy blessings. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Irish Rain
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Wow, awesome testimony Miss Patricia,
So very true also. We each are blessed
with abilities that will bring God
glory, and us joy.
Loved this!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your review.
reply by Irish Rain on 29-Apr-2021
    You're welcome!
Comment from Anne Johnston
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"I am soon going to be 83 years old and I can attest to the fact that he can keep giving us gifts to open throughout out lives. He has gifted me in ways that astound me, and by using the gifts for Him, I have been blessed far beyond measure."
As I read these words, I realized that I could have written them. I will be 83 in June, and agree with every word you have written here. Thank God for the gifts He gives and the ability to use them for Him.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your review. I will be 83 on June 7.
reply by Anne Johnston on 29-Apr-2021
    You are welcome. My birthday is June 22
reply by Anne Johnston on 29-Apr-2021
    You are welcome. My birthday is June 22
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
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Hi patcelaw

That was a lovely story about God and the gifts he bestows upon us. I'm not a religious man but I can appreciate the philosophical aspect of your message. You come across as someone who has had a very fulfilled life. Long may that continue of course.
I did notice one spelling mistake: keep giving us gifts to ope (open) throughout out lives
Take care Pete

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your review. I have corrected to post.
Comment from Dilettante junior
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Nice job with your story. It is spiritual in nature and speaks of how we are all gifts of God each packaged in a special way. There are some missing letters, typing mistakes, grammatical ones and sentence structure ones. Can be improved! The message is beautiful though. Keep going! Never give up!

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your review. Ihave made he corrections.