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Comment from l.raven
HI Marie, the most two beautiful times of the day...are...sunset...and sunrise...one of the things I miss most about moving out of Florida...such beautiful memories...
I love your poem...and love this picture...
very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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HI Marie, the most two beautiful times of the day...are...sunset...and sunrise...one of the things I miss most about moving out of Florida...such beautiful memories...
I love your poem...and love this picture...
very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Linda, thank you for your comments and review. Love you too - Dove xx
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you are so very welcome Dove...always...love xxoo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought this scene to life with your words here in your loop poem. The rooftops are an escape from the heavy traffic below, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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You brought this scene to life with your words here in your loop poem. The rooftops are an escape from the heavy traffic below, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. It sounds like a "loop," but I hope I managed to make it a "mirror sestet" which I learned about in Jannypan's Potlatch club. Love, Donna x
Comment from Sharon Davis
This mirror sestet paints some vivid pictures of Sunlight on the Rooftop. The structure of the poem is solid. An enjoyable read, well presented. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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This mirror sestet paints some vivid pictures of Sunlight on the Rooftop. The structure of the poem is solid. An enjoyable read, well presented. Good job.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Sharon, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
YOur mirror sestet reads well, Dove. The picture is a good pairing with your words. Those words follow the complex style as directed. Your words reverse well and are filled with great imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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YOur mirror sestet reads well, Dove. The picture is a good pairing with your words. Those words follow the complex style as directed. Your words reverse well and are filled with great imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Jan, Read your description and your mirror sestet as well as damommy's poem before attempting my own. Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Dove.
-I hope you weren't up
too high on the roof!
-You did a good job with the form.
-Effective imagery and rhyme
that creates a vivid word picture
of what you observed this morning.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Dove.
-I hope you weren't up
too high on the roof!
-You did a good job with the form.
-Effective imagery and rhyme
that creates a vivid word picture
of what you observed this morning.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Pam, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are very welcome, Dove.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Beautiful picture and well written words to illustrate. "Shining beams dart about the roof, clouds combining
Combining with reddish-pink images shining" Something magical about the sunrise.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Beautiful picture and well written words to illustrate. "Shining beams dart about the roof, clouds combining
Combining with reddish-pink images shining" Something magical about the sunrise.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Anne, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are welcome
