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NaPoWriMo 2021 Poetry Challenge

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Comment from pome lover
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Well, Mrs White- as they say, second time's the charm. I know he is lucky, and am glad you feel you are, too.
A happy ending. halleluiah.
question:
Did you create the Once Upon a Time letters? Pretty!
The whole thing is very attractive and eye catching.
K

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
    Hi Katharine, thank you for your lovely feedback :)
    No, I didn't create the lettering - they're courtesy of Google! I must pop back into my post and give credit where it's due!
    Best wishes, Debra
reply by pome lover on 28-Apr-2021
    you put the whole thing together. your talent!
Comment from lyenochka
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That's the best kind of happily-ever-after story! So glad that you found a loving husband who knows to treat you right! Well told so succinctly in these rhyming couplets.

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 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
    Thank you so much, Helen, I'm a lucky lady!
    Best wishes as always, Debra :)
reply by lyenochka on 28-Apr-2021
    💖💖 Me, too. Almost 40 years for us.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
    Congratulations! x
Comment from equestrik
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I am so glad for this fairy tale ending to your story! You have presented your work well. I appreciate your authors notes confirming the happy truth of your write.

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 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
    Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)