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Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "My Call to Motherhood"na-po-wri-mo contest
13 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful poem and tribute to mothers, that pairs perfectly with your chosen photo. This poem speaks to mothers-to-be, as well as explains motherhood. The clear message in your poem describes my mother, and describes me as a mother. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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This is a beautiful poem and tribute to mothers, that pairs perfectly with your chosen photo. This poem speaks to mothers-to-be, as well as explains motherhood. The clear message in your poem describes my mother, and describes me as a mother. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2021
reply by the author on 15-May-2021
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Dear LJbutterfly, thank you for your comments, review and best wishes.
Comment from poetwatch
What is a mother made of? Isn't it of love and caring as well as crying for that child not in her arms? Your write is good, but your notes make me sad. I hope you have recovered from your tears. This is a good offering for the Mother's Day Contest. thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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What is a mother made of? Isn't it of love and caring as well as crying for that child not in her arms? Your write is good, but your notes make me sad. I hope you have recovered from your tears. This is a good offering for the Mother's Day Contest. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Dear poetwatch, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Wendy G
This is a beautiful poem, written with a fresh perspective, and also authenticity. It does capture the anticipation of the joy of motherhood as well as the nurturing role. Well done. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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This is a beautiful poem, written with a fresh perspective, and also authenticity. It does capture the anticipation of the joy of motherhood as well as the nurturing role. Well done. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 13-May-2021
reply by the author on 14-May-2021
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Dear Wendy, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Bonnie Seach
What is a mother made of? A woman with perception, sensitivity and the instinct to love and nurture, and then express it in these words. Well done. Joy to you
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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What is a mother made of? A woman with perception, sensitivity and the instinct to love and nurture, and then express it in these words. Well done. Joy to you
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Dear Bonnie, thank you for your 6 stars and your comments
Comment from Leann DS
I love your creative and unique line... What is a mother made of? That line, and that it is repeated throughout your poem, makes for an effective and fun poem. Great job. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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I love your creative and unique line... What is a mother made of? That line, and that it is repeated throughout your poem, makes for an effective and fun poem. Great job. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Dear Leann, thank you for your comments and review. thanks also for your good luck wishes.
Comment from Anne Johnston
"What is a mother made of?
The sweet expectations of a young girl
Someday to hold in her womb a precious pearl."
So true, being a mother is the highest calling.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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"What is a mother made of?
The sweet expectations of a young girl
Someday to hold in her womb a precious pearl."
So true, being a mother is the highest calling.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Anne, thank you for your comments and review
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Comment from harmony13
The poem is excellent! I found the author's words heartfelt, clear
and creative. I thought about the author's words and my own experience
of Motherhood. The poem flows and connects. Thank you for the author's notes - they saddened me. Have a great day!....Maria
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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The poem is excellent! I found the author's words heartfelt, clear
and creative. I thought about the author's words and my own experience
of Motherhood. The poem flows and connects. Thank you for the author's notes - they saddened me. Have a great day!....Maria
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Maria, thank you for your comments and review
Comment from Dilettante junior
Very nice poem dear. You have beautifully penned the exact multi layered definition of a mother. I am sorry for your loss. Through your writing I can tell you are a great one. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Very nice poem dear. You have beautifully penned the exact multi layered definition of a mother. I am sorry for your loss. Through your writing I can tell you are a great one. Keep it up!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Dilettante junior, thank you for your comments and review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your notes are disturbing as your child was taken from you. Your words has a sad and melancholy story behind them as Motherhood is joyous and we never want to be parted from our child, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Your notes are disturbing as your child was taken from you. Your words has a sad and melancholy story behind them as Motherhood is joyous and we never want to be parted from our child, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review
Comment from T B Botts
What a touching, heartfelt poem. Where would we be without the tender care of our mothers? I lost my mom several years ago. My wife's mother passed last year. It's a tearing. I'm sorry to hear that you lost your child. I can't think of a greater sorrow. God bless and keep you.
Tom
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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What a touching, heartfelt poem. Where would we be without the tender care of our mothers? I lost my mom several years ago. My wife's mother passed last year. It's a tearing. I'm sorry to hear that you lost your child. I can't think of a greater sorrow. God bless and keep you.
Tom
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Tom, thank you for your comments and review. God bless you too
