Do you believe in fate?
A chance meeting leads to love.7 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The reader will be rooting for your sons: "Apparently, they worried all I did was work and stay home. What I tried to explain to each of them was I was happy. Well, they did not see it that way and kept pushing for me to date." now we follow through to see what actually happens. I like how he's kind of doing affirmations for himself. Even the waitress gave affirmation. Your boys did okay.
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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The reader will be rooting for your sons: "Apparently, they worried all I did was work and stay home. What I tried to explain to each of them was I was happy. Well, they did not see it that way and kept pushing for me to date." now we follow through to see what actually happens. I like how he's kind of doing affirmations for himself. Even the waitress gave affirmation. Your boys did okay.
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you Liz. As always I appreciate your review.
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My pleasure
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Hi Liz,
I have a story entered in the CREEPY contest. If you could read it and like it. I could use your vote.
Thanks, Richard
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I will find it
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DONE
Comment from Victoria MacDonald
I love stories, especially true ones, that draw on my emotions. I care about the couple, celebrate the magic moments, and love the way the author so honestly describes his endearing self-doubts.
I may be incorrect, but I believe there needs to be a paragraph change whenever the speaker changes in sections with dialogue.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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I love stories, especially true ones, that draw on my emotions. I care about the couple, celebrate the magic moments, and love the way the author so honestly describes his endearing self-doubts.
I may be incorrect, but I believe there needs to be a paragraph change whenever the speaker changes in sections with dialogue.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the kind words. All these years later, my wife and I still talk about my self doubt.
You are correct about the paragraphs. Unfortunately my grammar doesn?t match my writing. 🙁
Comment from Annette R.
Excellent writing. I can totally relate to this story. Other than the wine - I don't drink - something like this could have happened to me. It also proves curse words don't have to be used and stories can end happily. The story held my attention from beginning to end.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Excellent writing. I can totally relate to this story. Other than the wine - I don't drink - something like this could have happened to me. It also proves curse words don't have to be used and stories can end happily. The story held my attention from beginning to end.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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I cannot thank you enough for the kind words. I love writing. People have told me I am a good writer, but I have trouble seeing that.
One of these days I will get passed that. I hope??
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightful! Congrats to you both. You are truly a master story-teller--this is the third piece of yours I read.
periods vs question marks:
I looked at Max lying next to me. "I hope you are right?"
had to laugh. "I did not realize I was even doing that?"
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Delightful! Congrats to you both. You are truly a master story-teller--this is the third piece of yours I read.
periods vs question marks:
I looked at Max lying next to me. "I hope you are right?"
had to laugh. "I did not realize I was even doing that?"
Comment Written 11-May-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you for not only the kind words, but taking the time to read my stories. I appreciate it.
Comment from beizanten
A good choice of title and well written first paragraph. A very good second paragraph. A very interesting plotline. The emotion flow very well. you have done great
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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A good choice of title and well written first paragraph. A very good second paragraph. A very interesting plotline. The emotion flow very well. you have done great
Comment Written 30-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Being a new writer. Your comments are appreciated.
Thank you!
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful story and beautifully written. What an awesome first date. second date and more. Fairy book endings do happen and better yet when it just isn't on paper. Congratulations! Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Beautiful story and beautifully written. What an awesome first date. second date and more. Fairy book endings do happen and better yet when it just isn't on paper. Congratulations! Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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I have always believed in fate. I am not sure why, but God has been good to me. Meeting Denise was just another example.
Thank you for the kind words about my story.
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful love story. It is very well written, easy to follow and so inspiring. I am so happy for you and glad that this turned out the way it did. I hope you have many anniversaries to celebrate.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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What a beautiful love story. It is very well written, easy to follow and so inspiring. I am so happy for you and glad that this turned out the way it did. I hope you have many anniversaries to celebrate.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Anne, Thank you for the kind words about my story. I have always believed in fate. For some reason, God has been good to me all my years. Meeting Denise and marrying her is just another example. Perhaps when I meet him, I will find out why he has been so good to me.
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You are welcome. I believe God has a plan for each of us and has a way of working it out.
