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Comment from Sharon Davis
An uplifting and inspirational Cinquain poem that highlights the simple pleasures experienced for both teachers and students during recess, a time of fun and relaxation.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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An uplifting and inspirational Cinquain poem that highlights the simple pleasures experienced for both teachers and students during recess, a time of fun and relaxation.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Dear Sharon, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from harmony13
The author's word are uplifting, descriptive, and creative. How wonderful
to see these kids having so much fun! I found hearing about things
like this brighten the day. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and goes well with these words.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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The author's word are uplifting, descriptive, and creative. How wonderful
to see these kids having so much fun! I found hearing about things
like this brighten the day. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and goes well with these words.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2021
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Dear Maria (thank you for giving me your name) thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from equestrik
I love this and as a school counselor I not only love watching our students at play but also learn a lot more about them that way. Beautiful write and sweet picture as well.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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I love this and as a school counselor I not only love watching our students at play but also learn a lot more about them that way. Beautiful write and sweet picture as well.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Dear equestrik thank you for your comments and review Dove
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like your poem about children at play. Brings back memories of my childhood and of the years when my children were little. I feel sorry for kids today, they spend more time on electronic devices than having fun in the fresh air.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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I like your poem about children at play. Brings back memories of my childhood and of the years when my children were little. I feel sorry for kids today, they spend more time on electronic devices than having fun in the fresh air.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Dear Anne, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are welcome
Comment from Sally Law
This is a joy to behold, isn't it? I'm a grandmother now, and I still love to watch them at play, inside and out. Sending you my best today as always, dear,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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This is a joy to behold, isn't it? I'm a grandmother now, and I still love to watch them at play, inside and out. Sending you my best today as always, dear,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Dear Sal, thank you for your comments and review. My best to you too! Dove
Comment from Pantygynt
Yes exult in their happiness it will surely fade eventually so they are welcome to it for the moment. The pace quickens in this poem as we get deeper into this description of the children's joy.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Yes exult in their happiness it will surely fade eventually so they are welcome to it for the moment. The pace quickens in this poem as we get deeper into this description of the children's joy.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Dear Pantygynt, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is uplifting and poignant and children are naturally joyous and it is only when we gain knowledge that we see the cruelty in our world, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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This is uplifting and poignant and children are naturally joyous and it is only when we gain knowledge that we see the cruelty in our world, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
