Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed the sentiments here as you pay tribute to all our soldiers and their plight. You have a slightly uneven meter, but I enjoyed your poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-May-2021

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reply by the author on 24-May-2021

Thanks so much for your review; I often have problems with the meter; still, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Zan Zan

Excellent

Five stars please!

Aweeeee. How cute.

We for sure love our vets on this side.

God alone knows the things they go through out there for real...

 Comment Written 23-May-2021

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reply by the author on 24-May-2021

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

I like the way you repeated, and slightly changed, the line that your love is strong and did not die. This is a moving poem. I'm sorry your husband returned home broken, as many soldiers do. Thanks for his service, and yours. I'm glad your love has remained strong. Best wishes in the contest. Carol

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 Comment Written 23-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes.

reply by Carol Clark2 on 24-May-2021

You're welcome. I enjoyed it. Carol

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This kyrielle sonnet, Our Love was Army Strong, is a nicely put-together poem that reminds the readers that war is hell that sometimes can't be left behind. Love will find a way to heal.

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 Comment Written 23-May-2021

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reply by the author on 23-May-2021

Thank you kindly for your review and comments.