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spring moon

a 5 7 5 poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from zanya
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Yes a poem reminding us of the events surrounding this particular full moon 'summer promises ' but not just that. There are also 'warm spring surprises'

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
    Haha, yes, those spring surprises.
    Thanks for the review,
    have a great weekend, cheers, j
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the pink moon contest
with very good description and the nice addition of the rhymes.
Good choice of art work to match.
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the thoughtful review Robert.
    I will be gazing skyward tonight, cheers, j
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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You have a nice poem. Too bad you weren't able to find a pink spring flower instead of an orange summer flower, but I also know how hard finding a picture to match a poem or story is. Best of luck with this.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Thanks for the review. The orange poppy was the spring surprise, haha.
    I will be looking skyward tonight, cheers, j