Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, a clever rhyming poem with a selfish message and there are too many people who think like this in the world Debra, I loved the flow here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2021

Thanks so much, Dolly :) Glad you enjoyed this little poem. Best wishes as always, Debra x

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Debra,
This abcb quatrain defines selfishness well in poetic form. I like the artwork that shows the fault as a superhero which the one who is selfish most probably feels him/hereselt to be.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thank you, Joan, for your feedback, I appreciate it :)
Best wishes, Debra

reply by dragonpoet on 26-Apr-2021

No problem, Debra.
Joan

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

This short rhymed poem delivers a short sharp message. The artwork accompanying the piece mirrors the tone and theme very effectively. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thank you, Sharon, for your feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Great artwork and
nice presentation, Debra.
-You wrote a very good
poem with effective imagery
and rhyme.
-I like the attitude that is
expressed about this
"selfish Jack" and exactly
what he can do!!!
-Not too many more to go-
continued success with the project.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Pam :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Apr-2021

You are welcome, Debra.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I really like the artwork. In this case the capital S doesn't stand for Superman, it stands for Selfish.

This is a fun peppy verse that says all that needs to be said.

Excellent contribution to your NaPo project. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thank you, Gloria, for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Selfishness
by Debra White

Hello, Debra,

I like your short rhymed poem about selfishness. You describe what is like to be selfish well. I like your presentation too. Well done!

Cheers

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thank you, Gypsy, for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

He looks loveable and squeezable...but I have met him many times and he is ugly in his self-involvement. Very cute and clever, if we give him a wide berth. I like this very much!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thanks so much, Sherry :)
Best wishes as always, Debra

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Selfishness, identifies the egocentric person as one who was born under the sign --One Way. All take and no give makes the subject of this poem selfish.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thank you, Bill, for your feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

You nailed selfishness--witty bit of snark--great expression--hadn't heard it, got it from context, thought perhaps you'd coined it. Reference appreciated!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thanks, Liz :)
I appreciate your feedback, as always.
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Ah, that's something that everyone can do well from birth. It's the learning about how to consider others that's the real skill to master. Thanks for the fun little ditty - a great one for your pre-schoolers to learn!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021

Thanks so much, Helen :) I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra