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Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021

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National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event

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Comment from AnnaLinda
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Sunni,

This is a great poem! How about we not talk about it. Lol
Priceless second line!!! Love it!

"*Millions upon billions of people scared shitless*
Nobody wants to believe the real numbers
Obligingly, everyone is swearing by science
When should we expect a return to normalcy?"

My answer - NEVER.

Great job on this,

AnnaLinda

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Thank you
    Stay safe and strong. God bless you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with this abc poem, Alicia. I like the color scheme and how you formatted the 1st words of each line. I don't like the last word of line 2, but I know your work, your choice.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Hi Jan! Sorry. And I don't usually curse just couldn't find another suitable word. Hahahahaha. You're nice. Thank you. Stay safe and strong. God bless you :)
Comment from royowen
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They appear to be soaring, India was claiming to be on top of the pandemic, and complacency took over, and now they being overrun, with not enough machines or oxygen to keep people alive, the death toll is 190,000, well done Alicia, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Hi Roy! I heard the news. It's terrible and they are the #1 manufacturer of pharmaceuticals globally. How are they not taking care of themselves... It's infuriating. Thank you. Stay safe and strong. God bless you :)
reply by royowen on 26-Apr-2021
    Huge population, living close together, they declared they were on top of it too.
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
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Extremely straightforward! and i.e why I love it. These are the exact thoughts of the masses which you have expressed efficiently. However, I felt there could have been a better choice of words. Nevertheless, It was a pleasant read.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
    Hi! Sorry. I couldn't find an appropriate word to replace it. And I don't even cuss. Hahahahaha. You're nice. Thank you. Stay safe and strong :)
Comment from Cybertron1986
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These exact thoughts run through my thoughts on a daily basis. I liked how you used an honest and direct voice for this piece. It feels like the world will never be the same, let alone return to a state of normalcy. At the very least, I pray that at least the world can figure out a way to come together for future sake, preventing further chaos and lost.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021

Comment from lyenochka
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That is the question we are all asking. I liked that you saved that for the last line. We can get so overwhelmed by this pandemic dragging on and now with new variants scaring us. I'm still hoping that by summer, we'll be almost normal. Let's keep hoping and praying! Great job with your ABC poem!

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2021