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Comment from June Sargent
It's been awhile since I've attempted a teacup dictionary. You did very well in choosing an obscure word and defining it in a teacup format. The artwork is perfect.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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It's been awhile since I've attempted a teacup dictionary. You did very well in choosing an obscure word and defining it in a teacup format. The artwork is perfect.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Dear June, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Boogienights
I've never heard of that word, but I assume it means someone who wears tattered clothing and is perhaps homeless. This piece struck a chord in me, thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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I've never heard of that word, but I assume it means someone who wears tattered clothing and is perhaps homeless. This piece struck a chord in me, thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2021
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Dear Boogienights, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from harmony13
This poem is sad, descriptive, interesting and creative. I found these
words making me think of orphans, those homeless and street people.
These words are emotional. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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This poem is sad, descriptive, interesting and creative. I found these
words making me think of orphans, those homeless and street people.
These words are emotional. The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Dear harmony13, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an elegant teacup about a dilapidated situation, I have never heard of this word before so I learned something here. A fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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This is an elegant teacup about a dilapidated situation, I have never heard of this word before so I learned something here. A fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Glad you enjoyed it. Love, Donna x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You chose vividly descriptive, strong words for your skillfully-composed teacup dictionary poem. Tha artwork is thought-provoking and very fitting. I wonder if she's just resting or homeless.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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You chose vividly descriptive, strong words for your skillfully-composed teacup dictionary poem. Tha artwork is thought-provoking and very fitting. I wonder if she's just resting or homeless.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Dear Janice, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from BeckyRae
This is interesting. I had no idea that tatterdemalion was a word. I looked it up in the dictionary. Good job with this. I'm glad I learned something.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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This is interesting. I had no idea that tatterdemalion was a word. I looked it up in the dictionary. Good job with this. I'm glad I learned something.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2021
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Dear BeckyRae, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your teacup dictionary poem is in great shape, Dove. I like the bright green color against the stark colored image. Your words are easy to visualize and understand the meaning of the main word which I have never heard of. So thanks for the lesson.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Your teacup dictionary poem is in great shape, Dove. I like the bright green color against the stark colored image. Your words are easy to visualize and understand the meaning of the main word which I have never heard of. So thanks for the lesson.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from robyn corum
Donna,
Tattermadalion. THAT is just a fun word to say! I will have to figure out opportunities to toss that into my conversations! I like this poem but you could make the font larger if you wanted. My poor old eyes just aren't what they used to be. Good to see you posting!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Donna,
Tattermadalion. THAT is just a fun word to say! I will have to figure out opportunities to toss that into my conversations! I like this poem but you could make the font larger if you wanted. My poor old eyes just aren't what they used to be. Good to see you posting!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Dear robyn, thank you for your comments and review. Have trouble with my Advanced Editor, so I don't think I can make the font larger. Sorry. Donna
