Halloween, 1978
a story3 total reviews
Comment from mobileliz
Excellent on all counts. I personally can't handle horror, so this is a bad piece for me. But because I judge on quality, not personal preference, you get 5 stars. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
Excellent on all counts. I personally can't handle horror, so this is a bad piece for me. But because I judge on quality, not personal preference, you get 5 stars. Good job.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2021
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Exactly, not my favorite style either but I like to try different styles. Thanks for the review, back to whimsical haha
Cheers, j
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I don't usually do fantasy either, but I've done a few on here just for fun.
Comment from lancellot
Well, this was very interesting. I guess Tommy doesn't have a cell phone, and besides being close to death. He, like his friend Sam will die a virgin. If that's the best they could come up with to do with their dates, then they need to cross over.
Good entry.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
Well, this was very interesting. I guess Tommy doesn't have a cell phone, and besides being close to death. He, like his friend Sam will die a virgin. If that's the best they could come up with to do with their dates, then they need to cross over.
Good entry.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Haha, good one, yeah no phones in 1978. Thanks for the review, cheers, j
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a little macabre for my personal taste, but it is well-written and not only speaks to the idiocy of youth, but also has a surprise ending. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
This is a little macabre for my personal taste, but it is well-written and not only speaks to the idiocy of youth, but also has a surprise ending. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the thoughtful review, not my style either haha.
Have a great weekend, j
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You are welcome.