Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written earth day haiku. Nice overall presentation background colour and font. Very nice photo of the dolphins to compliment your words. Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021

Thanks for your review Joanne. Unfortunately no luck in the comp but it was fun to write.
Geoff

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the Earth Day Haiku. Your illustration, of course, sets the stage for your words. Dolphins are such beautiful creatures. This is nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your Earth Day haiku.
I like the mirroring of D and E words in lines 1&2 - it works well.
It would be an awful tragedy if dolphins became extinct.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

Comment from Cleigh115

Excellent

wow! What a poem, I love the 5-7-5 poems! This one is so great, the photo is amazing, vivid, and dolphins are my favorite creatures of the sea. So wonderful!

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku, Danger Zone, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting points to the mammals beneath the sea and their welfare in this world of pollution.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

A well written haiku with an important message of pending extinction of dolphins. Well presented with an image that serves the poem effectively. Nice done.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2021