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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Unemployment Line"na-po-wri-mo contest
12 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a powerful write for this contest and I applaud your hard work as well as your bravery in not only writing this but in living it. what an inspiration you are.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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This is a powerful write for this contest and I applaud your hard work as well as your bravery in not only writing this but in living it. what an inspiration you are.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Dear equestrik, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from MAMONIA
This is definitely a difficulty worth conquering. Good thing it finally worked, and you found a job.
I am sure that this experience has taught you a lot about life and hardship and has given you an excellent backbone and courage.
My best to you.
Marie
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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This is definitely a difficulty worth conquering. Good thing it finally worked, and you found a job.
I am sure that this experience has taught you a lot about life and hardship and has given you an excellent backbone and courage.
My best to you.
Marie
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Dear Marie, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent the unemployment line can really drag the confidence down, a wonderfully written poem describing this situation, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Excellent the unemployment line can really drag the confidence down, a wonderfully written poem describing this situation, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Dear kahpot, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Patty Palmer
It's sad when one becomes addicted to drugs, any chance of normalcy drops very low and fast. But, when some see how far they've dropped, they've hit rock bottom and they have no clue. Good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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It's sad when one becomes addicted to drugs, any chance of normalcy drops very low and fast. But, when some see how far they've dropped, they've hit rock bottom and they have no clue. Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Dear Patty, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Marigo J. Stathis
Your poem is a great ode to survival, how each of us can overcome nearly any obstacle on the way to success. I love the raw honesty and intensity in your poem. I think it could serve to instruct and inspire others. Many kudos sent your way! Stay safe, be well, and continue writing!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Your poem is a great ode to survival, how each of us can overcome nearly any obstacle on the way to success. I love the raw honesty and intensity in your poem. I think it could serve to instruct and inspire others. Many kudos sent your way! Stay safe, be well, and continue writing!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Dear Marigo, thank you for your comments, review, and kind words.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem clearly adheres to the requirement of the prompt. You did a good job with your story in a poem. Your lines flow well with good rhymes and great imagery. I like the use of mostly monorhymes through out. You notes add a good deal more info as to where this poem came from. Congratulations with your determination. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Your poem clearly adheres to the requirement of the prompt. You did a good job with your story in a poem. Your lines flow well with good rhymes and great imagery. I like the use of mostly monorhymes through out. You notes add a good deal more info as to where this poem came from. Congratulations with your determination. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review
Comment from cupa tea
Employment is always an issue, I think, no matter where your from or where you live now. This virus has so many bad things going for it; however, it has created some good things, which I hate to admit, connected with unemployment. There are tons of jobs to be found now. But, after its all over will they still exist?
I found your poem very well thoughout. It's construction has spotty places; however, I can over look that because I like the work you put into the poem. Blessed Be
G
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Employment is always an issue, I think, no matter where your from or where you live now. This virus has so many bad things going for it; however, it has created some good things, which I hate to admit, connected with unemployment. There are tons of jobs to be found now. But, after its all over will they still exist?
I found your poem very well thoughout. It's construction has spotty places; however, I can over look that because I like the work you put into the poem. Blessed Be
G
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Dear cupa tea, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Wendy G
Congratulations on getting through this difficult period of your life. You have certainly overcome, and I am sure you are more understanding and compassionate. Your poem is well written, with great authenticity. I hope it does well in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Congratulations on getting through this difficult period of your life. You have certainly overcome, and I am sure you are more understanding and compassionate. Your poem is well written, with great authenticity. I hope it does well in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Dear Wendy, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
What a great entry for the "something you overcame" contest. Very impressive that, even though you were stuck in a long rut, you were able to finally get out and move forward.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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What a great entry for the "something you overcame" contest. Very impressive that, even though you were stuck in a long rut, you were able to finally get out and move forward.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Dear Erika, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A well written poem that documents the journey you took to overcome your low self-esteem and gain the confidence to gain steady employment. Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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A well written poem that documents the journey you took to overcome your low self-esteem and gain the confidence to gain steady employment. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Dear Sharon, thank you for your comments and review.
