haiku (strong water lilies)
A Haiku Poem9 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Davis
I enjoyed this haiku and its theme of the earth providing for all. The image supports visually what the poem says in words. Thanks for sharing this work.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed this haiku and its theme of the earth providing for all. The image supports visually what the poem says in words. Thanks for sharing this work.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank for your wonderful comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your Earth Day haiku.
Was the poem inspired by the photo?
Without the photo, the imagery is strong anyway as your words are well chosen. Lovely concluding line.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your Earth Day haiku.
Was the poem inspired by the photo?
Without the photo, the imagery is strong anyway as your words are well chosen. Lovely concluding line.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written haiku. Nice overall presentation background colour and font. Beautiful photo selection to compliment your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This is a nicely written haiku. Nice overall presentation background colour and font. Beautiful photo selection to compliment your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Strong Water Lilies, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, allows that the world is protecting itself against the forces we muster to harm it.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This haiku, Strong Water Lilies, presented with a 5-7-5 formatting, allows that the world is protecting itself against the forces we muster to harm it.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from zanya
Yes a lovely floral touch with the exquisite lotus flower to remind us of the fact that 'earth provides for all ' let us try to help Mother Nature along and not hinder with our excesses
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Yes a lovely floral touch with the exquisite lotus flower to remind us of the fact that 'earth provides for all ' let us try to help Mother Nature along and not hinder with our excesses
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Cleigh115
Wow, what a powerful haiku you wrote! That photo is really eye-catching. The poem describes it so beautifully done! Well done for only 3 lines! I loved it
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Wow, what a powerful haiku you wrote! That photo is really eye-catching. The poem describes it so beautifully done! Well done for only 3 lines! I loved it
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Wow! Thank you very much
Comment from Leann DS
This is an excellent haiku that presents a clear and vivid picture as well as containing a great Earth Day theme. Your first two lines are grammatically connected and the third line is a fun KIREJI (although, I am not sure if I stated that grammatically correct). ð???
Well done, and best of luck to you in that contest. Hugs and blessings.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This is an excellent haiku that presents a clear and vivid picture as well as containing a great Earth Day theme. Your first two lines are grammatically connected and the third line is a fun KIREJI (although, I am not sure if I stated that grammatically correct). ð???
Well done, and best of luck to you in that contest. Hugs and blessings.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-You wrote a good haiku
that meets all of the requirements.
-Effective nature and seasonal
imagery with the water lily
and pink lotus.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-You wrote a good haiku
that meets all of the requirements.
-Effective nature and seasonal
imagery with the water lily
and pink lotus.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful image and lovely haiku to go with it. Yes, nature looks after other aspects of nature - and humans must learn to do the same, for the future well-being of the planet. Good wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Beautiful image and lovely haiku to go with it. Yes, nature looks after other aspects of nature - and humans must learn to do the same, for the future well-being of the planet. Good wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much
