Love Songs
haiku for earth day contest4 total reviews
Comment from Adwin Clark Ace
When I think of earth day, I think of marine life. So often, marine life is overlooked, it's not a "hot topic", or politically dramatic, but without it we wouldn't have an earth, or an earth day. Your haiku is captivating. I can hear & see the beautiful display of a love song. With just a few words, you created an image of wonder for my mind.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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When I think of earth day, I think of marine life. So often, marine life is overlooked, it's not a "hot topic", or politically dramatic, but without it we wouldn't have an earth, or an earth day. Your haiku is captivating. I can hear & see the beautiful display of a love song. With just a few words, you created an image of wonder for my mind.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts! Living on the coast of New England, we can appreciate them every summer when they return to our waters.
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The author uses words to paint the plight of animals in the oceans. Dolphins speak with each other and cry out in pain. I love the alliteration. It enhances poetry. Thank you and may you have success
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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The author uses words to paint the plight of animals in the oceans. Dolphins speak with each other and cry out in pain. I love the alliteration. It enhances poetry. Thank you and may you have success
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for stopping by to share your insights! Your feedback is much appreciated.
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All the best. Nice going.
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Nice to be in touch. May you have success. Thank you for caring about God's "little people".
Comment from lyenochka
This is a lovely and alliterative haiku. Growing up, we learned so much about the plight of the whales and thankfully some of them have come back in numbers. Great choice to focus on for your Earth Day poem!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This is a lovely and alliterative haiku. Growing up, we learned so much about the plight of the whales and thankfully some of them have come back in numbers. Great choice to focus on for your Earth Day poem!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for stopping by to share your insights! Your feedback is much appreciated. Always happy to hear from you.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This haiku sounds lovely to say. It is alliterative with the "s" sounds including, "songs," "sapphire," and the perfect last line, "soulful symphony." These beautiful creatures sing longer songs each year, as they pass through a portion of the water, that is much larger, than we can ever, imagine. I have gone whale watching myself and enjoyed very much, seeing the gray whales pass near the water vessel we were in.
Thank you for writing about the wonderful whales on this Earth Day!
Have a great evening,
Jesse
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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This haiku sounds lovely to say. It is alliterative with the "s" sounds including, "songs," "sapphire," and the perfect last line, "soulful symphony." These beautiful creatures sing longer songs each year, as they pass through a portion of the water, that is much larger, than we can ever, imagine. I have gone whale watching myself and enjoyed very much, seeing the gray whales pass near the water vessel we were in.
Thank you for writing about the wonderful whales on this Earth Day!
Have a great evening,
Jesse
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I am so glad this haiku resonated with you! Whales are gentle giants that are highly intelligent and more interactive then we realize. They deserve our respect as they roam the oceans with grace and dgnity.
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Yes, the whales do deserve our respect and dignity.
Have a nice evening,
Jesse
