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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Shifting Winds of April"na-po-wri-mo contest
9 total reviews
Comment from Bonnie Seach
A beautifully conducted loop poem. Artwork to enhance the word picture
of April winds. Wind is masterful and independent. It goes its own way and does as it pleases and says it cannot read...
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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A beautifully conducted loop poem. Artwork to enhance the word picture
of April winds. Wind is masterful and independent. It goes its own way and does as it pleases and says it cannot read...
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Dear Bonnie, thanks so much for your "exceptional" rating! And your comments too. Dove
Comment from Leann DS
This is an excellent loop poem, that flows nicely from line to line. The loop words are perfect! The rhymes are attractive and the meter is good. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Hugs.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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This is an excellent loop poem, that flows nicely from line to line. The loop words are perfect! The rhymes are attractive and the meter is good. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Hugs.
Comment Written 04-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Dear Leann, thank you for your comments and review. Hugs to you too! Dove
Comment from Sharon Davis
An enjoyable Loop poem that vividly describes the unpredictable winds of April. Nicely written and presented. Thanks for sharing this piece. Good job.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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An enjoyable Loop poem that vividly describes the unpredictable winds of April. Nicely written and presented. Thanks for sharing this piece. Good job.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Dear Sharon, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written loop poem. It has a nice overall presentation background colour and font. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This is a nicely written loop poem. It has a nice overall presentation background colour and font. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Dear Joanne, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from zanya
Isn't that one of the delights of the Spring season- sudden and unexpected and delightful changes in the weather almost on a daily basis- well portrayed here
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Isn't that one of the delights of the Spring season- sudden and unexpected and delightful changes in the weather almost on a daily basis- well portrayed here
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Dear zanya, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely image and a lovely poem, detailing the vagaries of Spring weather. You have expressed your thoughts clearly and with freshness, in the Loop style. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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A lovely image and a lovely poem, detailing the vagaries of Spring weather. You have expressed your thoughts clearly and with freshness, in the Loop style. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Dear Wendy, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The Spring breeze can be cold and I needed gloves yesterday morning and my sunglasses in the afternoon! A fine write about the unpredictable Spring in a loop poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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The Spring breeze can be cold and I needed gloves yesterday morning and my sunglasses in the afternoon! A fine write about the unpredictable Spring in a loop poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Wow, what a great entry for the loop poetry contest. I hope this one does well. It is very creative and well-written. I didn't even attempt the loop poem. Seemed way too tricky for me. Well done.
Have a great weekend!!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Wow, what a great entry for the loop poetry contest. I hope this one does well. It is very creative and well-written. I didn't even attempt the loop poem. Seemed way too tricky for me. Well done.
Have a great weekend!!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Dear Erika, thank you for your comments and review. I'm beginning to love the loop form of poetry. Have a happy, wonderful weekend! Dove
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have written a very good poem for this contest, following the pattern of repeating the last word as the first of the next line. However, the background colour you have chosen makes it very hard to read.
That is much easier to read, thank you for changing
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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You have written a very good poem for this contest, following the pattern of repeating the last word as the first of the next line. However, the background colour you have chosen makes it very hard to read.
That is much easier to read, thank you for changing
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Dear Anne, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are welcome
