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hyenas disturb the lion's snooze

Haiku (male lions catnap)

3 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I like your unusual approach .. it may not actually point out the issues wildlife is facing but these two are iconic figures of the savannah.

You describe a characteristic of each animal making the narrative interesting.


Lions are big cats and just like our domestic cats, they prefer to hunt at night when it's cooler.

Also being a predator hunting consumes lots of energy ..so after a kill they sleep a lot to retore and conserve energy for the next kill.

In addition the male is expected to protect their territory and the pride from other male lions on the prowl.

A male Lion has a lot of responsibilities.. usually he can keep his crown for 3/4 years max.

Then a younger lion will challenge and kill him ..sometimes he manages to excape but what awaits him is a life of loneliness and a unfitting death for a king .. I wrote a poem about that..

https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=997336



Hyenas and lions are life time rivals ..

they eat the same food so when the occasion occurs both will kill each others cubs..

it's their way of keeping the competition sustainable for both.

WildEarth safari guides check on their hyena den often ..they all have names and the cubs are adorable.

This is in March 2020 when Ribbon's cubs were first seen ..

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=0Rc2-qJFTmw


Later on in the year Ribbon with cubs older in August 2020

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=0tgv8lDisCM

When you see them so close up and you get to know their habits , it's impossible not to fall in love with them.

Beautiful artwork too.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
    Thanks for another sixer! I appreciate your support and comment on the contest site for this post.
Comment from Earl Corp
Excellent
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I don't think it's a wise thing for hyenas to wake up snoozing lions. Interesting factoid that it's the female lions that bring home the bacon. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
    I doubt they do, but my guess as a pack they might attack an old or injured lion.
Comment from Dilettante junior
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Nice job with your poem. It reminds me somehow of the lion king cartoon. The photo is nice, with a nice font and background and your notes are instructive. It definitely has a jungle nature vibe to it. Keep it up!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
    So pleased my entry provided you good vibes and you liked my overall presentation.