Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Two Poems, One Submission"National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event
9 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Davis
These poetic repeats - Two poems, One Submission, are well structured and diverse in their topics and theme. I enjoyed reading them. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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These poetic repeats - Two poems, One Submission, are well structured and diverse in their topics and theme. I enjoyed reading them. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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You're nice. Thank you.
Stay safe and strong :)
Comment from kahpot
Wow! I did read this a few times, (my knowledge of being a child as long since faded) I am glad the pet store came before tacobell, love the rhyme and the sometimes loop effect, children will adore this, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Wow! I did read this a few times, (my knowledge of being a child as long since faded) I am glad the pet store came before tacobell, love the rhyme and the sometimes loop effect, children will adore this, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much :)
Comment from Marigo J. Stathis
Absolutely phenomenal children's poetry! Love is too soft a word to describe how wonderful I think your word arrangements, rhyming schemes, and imagery are. I wouldn't change a thing here and wish I could give you a 10-star rating. Well done, poet, well done! :)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Absolutely phenomenal children's poetry! Love is too soft a word to describe how wonderful I think your word arrangements, rhyming schemes, and imagery are. I wouldn't change a thing here and wish I could give you a 10-star rating. Well done, poet, well done! :)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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You're very kind. Thank you very much :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
Both poems stand alone, I think the one about the owls is the best one. I'm glad they found home for them all. The second poem, I like how it ended if . Why do we not think the first that the last stanza is the best.
Patty
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Both poems stand alone, I think the one about the owls is the best one. I'm glad they found home for them all. The second poem, I like how it ended if . Why do we not think the first that the last stanza is the best.
Patty
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Thank you :)
Comment from Wendy G
Both are quite original and creative, but they don't really go together. Personally I would have kept one for my next poetry emergency! Especially if I was writing a poem a day, Nevertheless they are bot perfect for children, and that's what counts. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Both are quite original and creative, but they don't really go together. Personally I would have kept one for my next poetry emergency! Especially if I was writing a poem a day, Nevertheless they are bot perfect for children, and that's what counts. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
Those owls are so cute!! Why did the video upset you? Didn't they return the owls to their burrowing place? In Florida, lots of volunteers help to keep these owls safe.
I like your poems. The first one is a looping one and done very well. The second one helps us think and reminds us the importance of reciting, especially Scripture to help us live well.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Those owls are so cute!! Why did the video upset you? Didn't they return the owls to their burrowing place? In Florida, lots of volunteers help to keep these owls safe.
I like your poems. The first one is a looping one and done very well. The second one helps us think and reminds us the importance of reciting, especially Scripture to help us live well.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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I don't like mistreatment of animals. They could use some space. They're babies. Idk the real process for caring for owls.
Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A couple of loop poems here and it seems that you were inspired by these abandoned owls that were rescued and saved, a touching write Alicia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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A couple of loop poems here and it seems that you were inspired by these abandoned owls that were rescued and saved, a touching write Alicia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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I like animals, (people too). Thank you.
Have a nice week :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your advice from the last stanza: "If you know nothing else, recite the holy scriptures
The holy books are considered the ultimate guide to life" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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I love your advice from the last stanza: "If you know nothing else, recite the holy scriptures
The holy books are considered the ultimate guide to life" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Thank you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Both poems read well, Alicia. I enjoyed reading and reviewing each one. The owl poem told a good little story. The recite poem flowed well. I like the way each couplet consisted of a command then a result or action describing how one felt after doing the command. The images are good pairings with each, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Both poems read well, Alicia. I enjoyed reading and reviewing each one. The owl poem told a good little story. The recite poem flowed well. I like the way each couplet consisted of a command then a result or action describing how one felt after doing the command. The images are good pairings with each, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2022
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Hellow Jan. Thank you :)
