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Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021

Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "The Vase"
National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event

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Comment from juliaSjames
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Love this

This poem is my introduction to the sijo form which I find appealing and enjoyable..

Pretty vases and lovely flowers are made for each other. But a garden has its own integrity.

Stay safe healthy and blessed

Julia

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2021

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, I love the sentiment here. You decide to leave your garden to grow and buy cut flowers, a wise decision and I shall do the same, much enjoyed Alicia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2021

Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for writing a sijo poem! I like how you did it with these short lines for each stanza. I like that you start with the vase, and then you fix the vase's loneliness by adding flowers. Great picture to illustrate your poem!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

Comment from Irish Rain
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Ha ha...I love this.
I'd do the same!
I hate to cut my flowers, I
never bring them in.
I have fake flowers in my
indoor vases.
Wonderful,
blessings...

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

Comment from royowen
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A vase with flowers to adorn and partner it is like a yacht with a sail, or a mountain without snow, or a meadow without grass and flowers. This is beautifully written Alicia, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021