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Comment from Goodadvicechan
The picture reflects what you explain about Jesus in your notes. Similarly you have expressed the same in your poem.
It is very interesting to use double words in each line. It works very well in this poem. Good work
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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The picture reflects what you explain about Jesus in your notes. Similarly you have expressed the same in your poem.
It is very interesting to use double words in each line. It works very well in this poem. Good work
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Dear Goodadvicechan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from kahpot
This is a great form I love the double meaning in each line of the same word-very clever- I will have to try this one, very well written and thank you for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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This is a great form I love the double meaning in each line of the same word-very clever- I will have to try this one, very well written and thank you for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Dear kahpot, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from royowen
A clever little creation, and limiting to only three lines makes it a little more interesting. And gives it a focus for creative thinking, the wording and theme are so important in short poetry, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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A clever little creation, and limiting to only three lines makes it a little more interesting. And gives it a focus for creative thinking, the wording and theme are so important in short poetry, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Dear Roy, thank you for your comments and review. Bless you too, Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your invented style, Dove. I enjoyed reading it. Your form is well-explained and your example is good to show it off. I like the presentation. Your words contain a great message of hope and faith.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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You did a good job with your invented style, Dove. I enjoyed reading it. Your form is well-explained and your example is good to show it off. I like the presentation. Your words contain a great message of hope and faith.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
This double-word tercet, Living, Dying, Rising, brings the readers along as the soul transcends from lost to saved to own the way.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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This double-word tercet, Living, Dying, Rising, brings the readers along as the soul transcends from lost to saved to own the way.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Dear Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
