Poems through the seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Summer Soul"This collection is my 30 poems in 30 days
6 total reviews
Comment from Benshu-bookgai
the poem itself is pretty solid--my notes come more from the visuals and therefore to the piece as a whole: the contrast between the somewhat dark purple background and narrow black font makes the poem visually "fade into the paper" so to speak, and the art piece (when compared to the line "Of God's infinite universe/" ) seems to have a restricted field of view, almost as if it has blinders on.
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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the poem itself is pretty solid--my notes come more from the visuals and therefore to the piece as a whole: the contrast between the somewhat dark purple background and narrow black font makes the poem visually "fade into the paper" so to speak, and the art piece (when compared to the line "Of God's infinite universe/" ) seems to have a restricted field of view, almost as if it has blinders on.
Comment Written 03-May-2021
reply by the author on 04-May-2021
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Thank you for the feedback. I will look at that. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is beautifully written. I am glad I caught it. The artwork you chose captures the beauty of the poem. Thank you for sharing. I know I miss many of your poems, but soon, I retire and will catch more of them.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This poem is beautifully written. I am glad I caught it. The artwork you chose captures the beauty of the poem. Thank you for sharing. I know I miss many of your poems, but soon, I retire and will catch more of them.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
Comment from amada
"My summer soul lies with the skies..." This is a very beautiful line, it caught my fancy. I think nature is such a great inspiration for waiting anf for well being. This is a very well written poem, a breath of sun for this suny day.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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"My summer soul lies with the skies..." This is a very beautiful line, it caught my fancy. I think nature is such a great inspiration for waiting anf for well being. This is a very well written poem, a breath of sun for this suny day.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
This is a very lovely poem about what summer means to you, filled with many nature references which always appeals to me! A great chapter in your book! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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This is a very lovely poem about what summer means to you, filled with many nature references which always appeals to me! A great chapter in your book! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
Comment from lyenochka
I really enjoyed this spiritual poem! I had to think about the "summer soul" and perhaps it means that our souls can feel the difference of the seasons or perhaps it's a season of the soul when one feels more connected with God.
A minor comment about visual presentation - could just be my eyes. But the font on the pretty (but dark) background made it a little hard to read.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I really enjoyed this spiritual poem! I had to think about the "summer soul" and perhaps it means that our souls can feel the difference of the seasons or perhaps it's a season of the soul when one feels more connected with God.
A minor comment about visual presentation - could just be my eyes. But the font on the pretty (but dark) background made it a little hard to read.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the feedback. I will look at that. Thanks for the many stars.
Comment from Anne Johnston
A very nice poem about summer. I like the last lines:
"My summer soul prays everywhere
Delighted in my God connection
Thankful for His wonderful creation"
I suggest you lighten your background colour to make it a bit easier to read.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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A very nice poem about summer. I like the last lines:
"My summer soul prays everywhere
Delighted in my God connection
Thankful for His wonderful creation"
I suggest you lighten your background colour to make it a bit easier to read.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars.
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You are welcome
