-Poetic Passage-
Free verse6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Poetic Passage, has a lot of interesting groupings of words which, when searched for meaning, end up being only interesting groupings of words.
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This free verse, Poetic Passage, has a lot of interesting groupings of words which, when searched for meaning, end up being only interesting groupings of words.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
Comment from Gert sherwood
Gordon Stacey your poetic words with your Poetic Words in free verse As I read each one of your thoughts are found when we listen to the Spirit he will enlighten us.
Now here is a poem that wrote years ago.Which I had plublised
The right poetic words
represent beauty,
imagination,
thoughts of merriment,
feelings of hardship,
encouraging vibes,
inward words of merit,
and
voicing words of love.
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Gordon Stacey your poetic words with your Poetic Words in free verse As I read each one of your thoughts are found when we listen to the Spirit he will enlighten us.
Now here is a poem that wrote years ago.Which I had plublised
The right poetic words
represent beauty,
imagination,
thoughts of merriment,
feelings of hardship,
encouraging vibes,
inward words of merit,
and
voicing words of love.
Gert
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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That was delightful Gert. Isn't poetry amazing? It can reach areas unheard of, thus, setting the spirit free to flow fluidly throughout thoughts for truth and love.
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You are so welcome
Gordon Stacey
Gert
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You are so welcome
Gordon Stacey
Gert
Comment from royowen
Of course we can't possibly glorify God in our own self effort, it is only temporary if we do. The only way is to yield to the most high Hod, in a sense He moulds us by the power of His will, however out humanity will revisit at some stage, but Christ makes up the shortfall Gordon. Well done my friend, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo :our spirit(s) forms...
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Of course we can't possibly glorify God in our own self effort, it is only temporary if we do. The only way is to yield to the most high Hod, in a sense He moulds us by the power of His will, however out humanity will revisit at some stage, but Christ makes up the shortfall Gordon. Well done my friend, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo :our spirit(s) forms...
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you, i am so pleased with your poetic comprehension. To see the true weight of certain words, placed snug within its own verse, to better explore ones own universe, and express its divinity.
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Good job
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Question is this intentional - Ã??, if not please correct because there are many picking reviewers that will consider this a penalty. The last stanza makes me think of a philosophical nature - Rooted within this imaginative mind, versed in psycological diversity, and through applicable constructs to advance and experience the inner nature has become empowered. As one rejoices, feel free to graze these verses forged to personalize a cool pool in which the spirit rejuvenates and soothes.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Question is this intentional - Ã??, if not please correct because there are many picking reviewers that will consider this a penalty. The last stanza makes me think of a philosophical nature - Rooted within this imaginative mind, versed in psycological diversity, and through applicable constructs to advance and experience the inner nature has become empowered. As one rejoices, feel free to graze these verses forged to personalize a cool pool in which the spirit rejuvenates and soothes.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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I have no idea how to get rid of that, when i copy from my cell phones notes app, it always does that. I even edit and remove those, yet they still pop up, and thank you kindly for tge positivevrevorw friend.
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lol, i sounded garbled, it was my poor typing...
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No worries, my phone does the same:)
Comment from juliaSjames
Your outpouring of poetry contains some gems
wisps that simply shimmer for delight.
where kindness offers a lodestone, to shift any form of stone heartened flowers into the lillies laden in the meadows,
these verses forged to personalize a cool pool in which the spirit rejuvenates and soothes
The reader can look for meaning and structure and become lost and to some extent frustrated. Or the reader can let your words wash over the listening mind.
In my opinion you are a creative and talented writer. Perhaps, like all of us, you are finding your way through your poetry. As your way becomes clearer, so your verse will develop in clarity and power
Thanks for sharing
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Your outpouring of poetry contains some gems
wisps that simply shimmer for delight.
where kindness offers a lodestone, to shift any form of stone heartened flowers into the lillies laden in the meadows,
these verses forged to personalize a cool pool in which the spirit rejuvenates and soothes
The reader can look for meaning and structure and become lost and to some extent frustrated. Or the reader can let your words wash over the listening mind.
In my opinion you are a creative and talented writer. Perhaps, like all of us, you are finding your way through your poetry. As your way becomes clearer, so your verse will develop in clarity and power
Thanks for sharing
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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I am always striving for self discovery, yet aware that i need to magnify my holy lord. Your words of praise filled me with such joy my friend. You stay safe healthy and blessed.
Comment from Charlie Davis
Ã??Ã? that character whether intentional or accidental from a file conversion really disrupted the flow of what you were trying to communicate. Sometimes simple words work in describing love.
Kind of long winded.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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Ã??Ã? that character whether intentional or accidental from a file conversion really disrupted the flow of what you were trying to communicate. Sometimes simple words work in describing love.
Kind of long winded.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2021
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I am not very rich, so i dont have a lap top. I use my cell phone and when i copy from my notes and paste it always does that. I know not why. But i did efit tge post. Please feel free to read it once more my friend.